Kids And Flowers
I love them.4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Ok, if this doesn;t win, and I love the picture, then the reviewers only read one or two and never got to yours Tyburn. I like that youy could even piece together sensibility in a Tyburn and had I met him on the street before he put his thoughts to key Tyburn's would never have appeared.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Ok, if this doesn;t win, and I love the picture, then the reviewers only read one or two and never got to yours Tyburn. I like that youy could even piece together sensibility in a Tyburn and had I met him on the street before he put his thoughts to key Tyburn's would never have appeared.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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You think it is that good?
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I should proof read things. I know spellcheck seems to think it?s better than I . Darn and yes yours was best in my opine
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Thanks, it means a lot.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 3 votes!
To start off, I like daisies , they bright and gay looking
Secondly , your 4 words are original
Thirdly, your poem, said aloud, has a smooth and pleasant sound.
It has a great rhyme
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Ciao poet, you now have 3 votes!
To start off, I like daisies , they bright and gay looking
Secondly , your 4 words are original
Thirdly, your poem, said aloud, has a smooth and pleasant sound.
It has a great rhyme
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a fun way to approach this form - splitting it into the two elements and joining them by rhyme and rhythm. Great job with the Tyburn, and I very much enjoyed the read :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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This is a fun way to approach this form - splitting it into the two elements and joining them by rhyme and rhythm. Great job with the Tyburn, and I very much enjoyed the read :-)
Mike
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thanks! Please read my To My Husband story.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Your poem is okay. It seems to meet the requirements. Your font size is large and easy to read. The poem text made sense until I got to "Maisy". I looked in the dictionary but couldn't find that word. What does it mean?
The presentation is also missing. It needs a visual. Like food we eat most things with our eyes first. That's why great illustrations help sell many books. The visual draws one in and the words glues one to the pages.
Thank you for teaching me something new.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Your poem is okay. It seems to meet the requirements. Your font size is large and easy to read. The poem text made sense until I got to "Maisy". I looked in the dictionary but couldn't find that word. What does it mean?
The presentation is also missing. It needs a visual. Like food we eat most things with our eyes first. That's why great illustrations help sell many books. The visual draws one in and the words glues one to the pages.
Thank you for teaching me something new.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Maisy is a flower.
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Maisy is a British-American children's animated television series. I don't know it as a flower. Is it inventive language you are using? Which is indeed okay, but it's not a flower I have ever heard of.
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It's still a flower
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Okay!
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Push the review up.
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Did you read my husband story?
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I will. I had to leave for errands. Maisy is indeed a flower in the chrysanthemum family. You taught me a flower I didn't know. Thank you,
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Which story would that be?
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It is called My Husband.
