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Betrayed

A betrayal of love

31 total reviews 
Comment from lancellot
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A nice 'if these walls could talk' tale. I think you did a good job starting with the very beginning of the family unit, the trials, hardships and joys the family experienced. Good idea with the horror ending for the poor house.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
    Thank you. This actually happened. Mom and Dad lived in the house until grandma died then moved into the other home. It was closer to the water well. I used to wonder if the house was lonesome when I was a kid. Thank you for the six stars. I appreciate them. Hugs