Let Jesus Bear Your Burdens
He died for us all.4 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
A concise and beauteous
Christian poem. More people
need to turn to Him, not
only in times of trouble but
also in the sunshine. Praise
His Holy Name. Have a
blessed Sunday, pookietoo.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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A concise and beauteous
Christian poem. More people
need to turn to Him, not
only in times of trouble but
also in the sunshine. Praise
His Holy Name. Have a
blessed Sunday, pookietoo.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 2-4-6-8 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive and so very true words with very lovely imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 2-4-6-8 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive and so very true words with very lovely imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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Thanks, have you read my other recent poems?
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I am not sure. I will try to do that!
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Please read my my body poem
Comment from lyenochka
Great message in your poem. I like that you tell the reader to reach out to Jesus, our Burden Bearer. I think you don't have to make your font smaller to keep the lines similar in length as a triangular shape is good for this kind of poem. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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Great message in your poem. I like that you tell the reader to reach out to Jesus, our Burden Bearer. I think you don't have to make your font smaller to keep the lines similar in length as a triangular shape is good for this kind of poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
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Hope you read my success poem!
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This is a blind entry so I don't know who you are and wouldn't know about your success poem. Perhaps you can reply after the voting is done.
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I am pookietoo.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem. The syllable count is accurate. The text presents a clear message. The font size is large and easy to read. The visual fits well with the text. However, with such a large visual, I would center the text on the visual. This way your text would be more prominent. Well-done poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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This is a good poem. The syllable count is accurate. The text presents a clear message. The font size is large and easy to read. The visual fits well with the text. However, with such a large visual, I would center the text on the visual. This way your text would be more prominent. Well-done poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
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Please read my courage poem.
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You are a blind entry. At this time, I cannot find that poem. After the contest closes come back and remind me. Please read in my portfolio some of my poetry.
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