Living In The Light
Keep your face to the Sun/Son.7 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Very positive. Always look forward and upward. There is always something better waiting for us. I like "Let shadows fall back." Let them go, release them, concentrate on the light.
Very nice.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Very positive. Always look forward and upward. There is always something better waiting for us. I like "Let shadows fall back." Let them go, release them, concentrate on the light.
Very nice.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reviewing, Gary.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Living in the Light, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that once we step out of the darkness of ignorance, we mustn't allow ourselves to regress.
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This 5-7-5, Living in the Light, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that once we step out of the darkness of ignorance, we mustn't allow ourselves to regress.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem. It is a great poem and a great piece of advice. I especially like the last line. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem. It is a great poem and a great piece of advice. I especially like the last line. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thanks for this lovely review, Jessi.
Comment from Wendy G
This is cleverly written, and combines wisdom with writing skill. It is original and creative, and has a clear and well-chosen presentation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This is cleverly written, and combines wisdom with writing skill. It is original and creative, and has a clear and well-chosen presentation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest with
some excellent advice and very good use of internal and external rhyme.
Nicely done with excellent art work to match.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest with
some excellent advice and very good use of internal and external rhyme.
Nicely done with excellent art work to match.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thanks Robert.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a great poem to remind us of God and Jesus. They have our backs. We must keep them in our minds and souls. I like the picture. It goes great with the story. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This is a great poem to remind us of God and Jesus. They have our backs. We must keep them in our minds and souls. I like the picture. It goes great with the story. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you Carolyn.
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You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love the photo you added to this writing it is perfect for the subject. This has a lovely flow of words that makes it a joy to read. I look forward to more of your work. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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I love the photo you added to this writing it is perfect for the subject. This has a lovely flow of words that makes it a joy to read. I look forward to more of your work. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your nice comments.
