My love came in a dream
an angel came to me2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This could be an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest,
but the first line has six syllables.
You can either change the wording or drop "my"
Otherwise, well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This could be an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest,
but the first line has six syllables.
You can either change the wording or drop "my"
Otherwise, well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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thanks I fixed the typo.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, love can feel like that, as if someone has come to rescue us from our downward spiral, a wonderful poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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Excellent, yes, love can feel like that, as if someone has come to rescue us from our downward spiral, a wonderful poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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thanks glad you appreciated it.
