Taj Mahal by Moonlight
A Manyoshu poem for the Japanese club challenge9 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem--written according to strict standards for this style--vividly describes a very famous place and the romantic, moving
reason behind its creation.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Your ultra-concise poem--written according to strict standards for this style--vividly describes a very famous place and the romantic, moving
reason behind its creation.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing your insightful feedback. I'm gald you enjoyed this piece on the Taj Mahal - one of the ancient wonders of the world - dedicated to love.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Taj Mahal by Moonlight, honors the established tribute from the shah to his much-adored wife. Such a lasting show of devotion for his true love. Wow.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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This poem, Taj Mahal by Moonlight, honors the established tribute from the shah to his much-adored wife. Such a lasting show of devotion for his true love. Wow.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem highlighting the Shah's love and devotion for his Princess, the Chosen One. Your positive feedback is encouraging and appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, June,
Beautiful beautiful presentation. Good manyoshu form. Very romantic and right on point with the subject matter. Well done! You always do so well. I'm proud of you.
gypsy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Hello, June,
Beautiful beautiful presentation. Good manyoshu form. Very romantic and right on point with the subject matter. Well done! You always do so well. I'm proud of you.
gypsy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem highlighting the Shah's love and devotion for his Princess, the Chosen One. Your positive feedback is encouraging and appreciated, as always.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem about one of the wonders of the world which was visited by Princess Diana in her hour of need she sat on the steps all alone, a fine write June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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A fine poem about one of the wonders of the world which was visited by Princess Diana in her hour of need she sat on the steps all alone, a fine write June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem about the Taj Mahal - it is an amazing wonder of the world dedicated to everlasting love. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Much appreciated!
Comment from Debbie Pope
I haven't read one of your Japanese poems in a while. This one is pretty. I like how you tie together lives 1, 3, and 4, and how you equate the Taj Majal with the word love. I really enjoyed the notes though. I always assumed that Mumtaz Majal was a beautiful young princess. I can't imagine dying in childbirth after having 13 other children.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I haven't read one of your Japanese poems in a while. This one is pretty. I like how you tie together lives 1, 3, and 4, and how you equate the Taj Majal with the word love. I really enjoyed the notes though. I always assumed that Mumtaz Majal was a beautiful young princess. I can't imagine dying in childbirth after having 13 other children.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem about the Taj Mahal - it is an amazing wonder of the world dedicated to everlasting love. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Much appreciated!
Comment from Dylan 22
This was a great poem! I didn't know any of this about the Taj Mahal before reading, and its always great to learn something new. I loved the idea of something so grand, beautiful, and extravagant being a monument to love, I found it really touching.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This was a great poem! I didn't know any of this about the Taj Mahal before reading, and its always great to learn something new. I loved the idea of something so grand, beautiful, and extravagant being a monument to love, I found it really touching.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem about the Taj Mahal - it is an amazing wonder of the world dedicated to everlasting love. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Much appreciated!
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh this is a perfect poem for this prompt, June. Lovely artwork sets the stage for an eloquent verse about the love he had for her. I long to see the Taj Mahal, but it is so far away. A wonderful verse.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Oh this is a perfect poem for this prompt, June. Lovely artwork sets the stage for an eloquent verse about the love he had for her. I long to see the Taj Mahal, but it is so far away. A wonderful verse.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem about the Taj Mahal - it is an amazing wonder of the world dedicated to everlasting love. I would ttabel to see it as well. But, it's not realistic, I'm afraid! Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Much appreciated!
Comment from BethShelby
I've always marveled at the beauty of the Taj Mahal and the love story behind. I love to see. On the other hand, didn't these Indian lovers realize that having so many children isn't good for a woman's body. Maybe he felt a little quilty. The Manyoshu you wrote is beautiful and so is that picture. It look mystical.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I've always marveled at the beauty of the Taj Mahal and the love story behind. I love to see. On the other hand, didn't these Indian lovers realize that having so many children isn't good for a woman's body. Maybe he felt a little quilty. The Manyoshu you wrote is beautiful and so is that picture. It look mystical.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem about the Taj Mahal - it is an amazing wonder of the world dedicated to everlasting love. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Much appreciated!
Comment from royowen
The story of the Taj Mahal is one of the greatest monuments to love ever conceived, and it was a wonderful thing you've done, beautifully written and expressed Dear June, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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The story of the Taj Mahal is one of the greatest monuments to love ever conceived, and it was a wonderful thing you've done, beautifully written and expressed Dear June, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this manyoshu poem about the Taj Mahal - it is an amazing wonder of the world dedicated to everlasting love. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments. Much appreciated!
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Well done
