Retrospect
When we are a bit of mess but still OK3 total reviews
Comment from Annmuma
We are all the result of what has happened to us -- those things within our control and those outside of our control. "Maybe I'm cracked perfection and a medley of damage; Maybe I'm the brightest of the dark that only a few can see." Powerful thought and a powerful truth. Good luck in the contest and in life. ann
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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We are all the result of what has happened to us -- those things within our control and those outside of our control. "Maybe I'm cracked perfection and a medley of damage; Maybe I'm the brightest of the dark that only a few can see." Powerful thought and a powerful truth. Good luck in the contest and in life. ann
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your time in reading and commenting. It's greatly appreciated.
Comment from leather
I especially liked the lines "Maybe I'm the brightest of the dark
That only a few can see." The only line that paused me was "I'm fluent in death" as the speaker seems very alive and intuitive.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I especially liked the lines "Maybe I'm the brightest of the dark
That only a few can see." The only line that paused me was "I'm fluent in death" as the speaker seems very alive and intuitive.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your time in reading and commenting. It's greatly appreicated.
Comment from Dylan 22
This is such a touching poem. I loved the hope in the ending, especially following the rather bleak outlook that the first portion of this poem had. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This is such a touching poem. I loved the hope in the ending, especially following the rather bleak outlook that the first portion of this poem had. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It's greatly appreciated.
