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Scene at a Presidential Run 13

a scene from a script

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Comment from simonbagh
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We are all paying, sweetheart. Imperialists are draining us dry.
That seems nicely arranged and great job up to this stage that is produced here, I would follow its other parts thanks for sharing it

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Simon
Comment from Jay Squires
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I blink twice and do a little twirl and lo and behold Pons is a serious contender ... with Ned in tow. I don't know where you're taking us with this, Bill. I'd like to see that. We've already had a Ned at the helm.

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Thank you, Jay, for giving this a look. Maybe they can save the nation.