Berating Bad Driving
Pay attention, drive safely.15 total reviews
Comment from Catherine Ballard
I really enjoyed this poem and its clever rhymes, the structure works very well for the content. Some verses need to be read a second time to get the intonation right so that the rhyme flows properly, but they all work. Well done!
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I really enjoyed this poem and its clever rhymes, the structure works very well for the content. Some verses need to be read a second time to get the intonation right so that the rhyme flows properly, but they all work. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHA.
Well, THIS certainly embodies the writing prompt. You have definitely written hilariously about scenarios that are MOST exasperating. In fact, SO well-written was this that I was beginning to feel stressed and full of road rage...all while making it rhyme!
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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HAHAHAHA.
Well, THIS certainly embodies the writing prompt. You have definitely written hilariously about scenarios that are MOST exasperating. In fact, SO well-written was this that I was beginning to feel stressed and full of road rage...all while making it rhyme!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your encouraging review. Are you back as a member again?
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Yes!
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Yes!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are humorous, funny, made me smile, are descriptive
and creative. The author's words are exactly what I think and feel when
I am driving! The poem really made me laugh! The poem flows and
connects well. The last line gave good advice! Awesome artwork!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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The author's words are humorous, funny, made me smile, are descriptive
and creative. The author's words are exactly what I think and feel when
I am driving! The poem really made me laugh! The poem flows and
connects well. The last line gave good advice! Awesome artwork!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Glad I could deliver a chuckle with a common dislike.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Berating Bad Driving, seems to come easily as the nuts on the road deliver material with every passing automobile. Funny.
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This poem, Berating Bad Driving, seems to come easily as the nuts on the road deliver material with every passing automobile. Funny.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Glad I could deliver a chuckle with a common dislike.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, unfortunately, it is not only our driving that we have to concentrate on, so many many idiots somehow how get and keep their right to drive, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Excellent, unfortunately, it is not only our driving that we have to concentrate on, so many many idiots somehow how get and keep their right to drive, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your comments - staying safe on the roads is a matter of luck.
