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First Date

7/4/3 modern senryu

5 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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How cute, I love my Mom also, the meaning (to me) (besides loving his mom) is the boy being so young does not yet quite understand the price of a date, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Yes, the little boy doesn't understand value of money yet.

    Kym, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    "We are all wanderers on this earth. Our hearts are full of wonder, and our souls are deep with dreams." -Gypsy Proverbs
Comment from aryr
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Awww, that is so sweet, Gypsy. That was great that the boy wanted to take his mom on a date. I loved the picture, it was perfect. Blessed be and hugs!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Aryr, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem
    blessed be. :)
    gypsy
    Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason.- Novalis
reply by aryr on 05-Jul-2022
    Most welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs,
Comment from Sugarray77
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Cute, Gypsy, cute! A perfect set up and delivery for this adorable theme. I raised two boys and they were always doing sweet stuff too. Enjoyable.

Melissa

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Melissa, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."- Novalis
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like this poem- good presentation- picture- heart warming- son's do love there Mom's dearly- and would want to give them something special if they found a dollar- cute poem- good job

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    AP, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."- Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
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Awww! I think there might be some 99 cent whoppers sometime. Well, then there's tax so I guess a dollar won't work but I'm sure that Mom is flattered! Cute senryu!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
    Sometimes, Atticus asks for money, I give him some change or one dollar and he thinks he is rich LoL

    Helen, , thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."- Novalis
reply by lyenochka on 05-Jul-2022
    Lol! I love that stage when small things make them happy. When my oldest was three an ice cream cone could fix everything!