Everything
A short review of everything.41 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Children want everything they see another child with. They want grown-up things so they can be adults quickly. We were poor after the war, lucky to have jam on bread. Good of you to dream and try to reach the stars.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Children want everything they see another child with. They want grown-up things so they can be adults quickly. We were poor after the war, lucky to have jam on bread. Good of you to dream and try to reach the stars.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I have talked to people in Germany about the lack of food
at the end of the war and after. I have never known serious
starvation. I hope to never experience it.
Thank you,
Doug
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We are in the end of days. The four horsemen are riding. K xx
Comment from leather
This poem moves along at a great clip and avoids big, bulky words. It is just fun to read. Thank you so much for posting. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This poem moves along at a great clip and avoids big, bulky words. It is just fun to read. Thank you so much for posting. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from MissMerri
I think this is a quite original and creative love poem, entirely devoid of anything resembling a cliche. I consider that a first-rate accomplishment. I'm not sure you intended it to be a love-poem, since you didn't give it any label implying so, but nevertheless it is that, and is quite compelling. I thought, as I read the long list of things desired, Yes! I relate to that! I know just how that feels! So when I got to the very last few lines, I was wonderfully surprised and delighted. That's an ideal way to end a piece of writing. *smile* Thanks for a most enjoyable read. MM
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I think this is a quite original and creative love poem, entirely devoid of anything resembling a cliche. I consider that a first-rate accomplishment. I'm not sure you intended it to be a love-poem, since you didn't give it any label implying so, but nevertheless it is that, and is quite compelling. I thought, as I read the long list of things desired, Yes! I relate to that! I know just how that feels! So when I got to the very last few lines, I was wonderfully surprised and delighted. That's an ideal way to end a piece of writing. *smile* Thanks for a most enjoyable read. MM
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Bowing, thank you.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sorry Victir...... I am already taken. And the contract made with my missus is wound as tight as alternator wires. Only suggestion is Hula hoop, and Hula teevee seems odd being so close. What about Netflix or some other app to select?
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Sorry Victir...... I am already taken. And the contract made with my missus is wound as tight as alternator wires. Only suggestion is Hula hoop, and Hula teevee seems odd being so close. What about Netflix or some other app to select?
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Ha ha. No argument.
Thank you.
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Glad you see the humor in my response.
Comment from estory
I liked it. This is a great form for this, I liked the listing, it is at once fragmented and shows how fragmented life can be, but it also shows the diversity of a life, all the facets of it, all the precious things collected in it. All the images of these beautiful moments, these precious moments, add up to a celebration of life. You are now very accomplished in this style of yours. estory
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I liked it. This is a great form for this, I liked the listing, it is at once fragmented and shows how fragmented life can be, but it also shows the diversity of a life, all the facets of it, all the precious things collected in it. All the images of these beautiful moments, these precious moments, add up to a celebration of life. You are now very accomplished in this style of yours. estory
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Oh my.
I am humbly, and I do mean humbly,
accepting your accolades. How very nice of you.
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from Ric Myworld
You sound very much like most all of us. You don't want all or everything, just enough to make us happy . . . like most of us, you just want a little bit. A little bit of everything it takes to make you happy. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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You sound very much like most all of us. You don't want all or everything, just enough to make us happy . . . like most of us, you just want a little bit. A little bit of everything it takes to make you happy. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Ha ha. Yes, it is so.
I want everything, but not at the
expense of others.
Thank you.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Victortouche a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. I enjoyed your poem, you picked an interesting format. Does that suppose to say Wedgetables or should it be vegetables? Either way, nice poem
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Hello Victortouche a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. I enjoyed your poem, you picked an interesting format. Does that suppose to say Wedgetables or should it be vegetables? Either way, nice poem
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I admit, I just love the word vegetables
expressed as wedgeetables. We are word smiths,
eh? Lol
Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
An original and creative expression of your thoughts, and a good way to lead up to the climax at the end, the pinnacle of what you wanted. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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An original and creative expression of your thoughts, and a good way to lead up to the climax at the end, the pinnacle of what you wanted. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you, dear.
Comment from Raul1
I like your poetry. Well written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well done. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I like your poetry. Well written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well done. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reviewing.
Doug
Comment from Marienkiefer
This poem is original in its presentation and discussion. Thoughts are presented as rational assertions and aspirations.
Images impressed in my mind: sunrises, sunsets,
fragments of thoughts, but interconnected to a lasting gesture and image, a simple thought that connects all the fragments together and that is: the smiling and the me of your poem,
Very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This poem is original in its presentation and discussion. Thoughts are presented as rational assertions and aspirations.
Images impressed in my mind: sunrises, sunsets,
fragments of thoughts, but interconnected to a lasting gesture and image, a simple thought that connects all the fragments together and that is: the smiling and the me of your poem,
Very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Smiling, thank you.
