Everything
A short review of everything.41 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a cute piece. It sounds like you got everything you've wanted within reason. In the end, you found your loved one, and that makes you smile. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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This is a cute piece. It sounds like you got everything you've wanted within reason. In the end, you found your loved one, and that makes you smile. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thanks, John.
To be honest, everything one may wish
for, contains several lifetimes. But, I am not
complaining.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done. I like it. I too wanted everything. and in the end I got many things but not everything. Got the most important thing right, marrying the lady of my dreams.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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nicely done. I like it. I too wanted everything. and in the end I got many things but not everything. Got the most important thing right, marrying the lady of my dreams.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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And, as you know,
that...is...
everything.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your list is not unreasonable. It includes many items that would make anyone's life more pleasant, like, flowers, sunrises, sunsets, and a swing set. I hope you've had most items on the list, especially the final item, "you," the special person you are writing to.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Your list is not unreasonable. It includes many items that would make anyone's life more pleasant, like, flowers, sunrises, sunsets, and a swing set. I hope you've had most items on the list, especially the final item, "you," the special person you are writing to.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Yes, thank you.
Just found her.
Smiling,
Doug
Comment from GTG345
Thank you for this great poem and at the end it got me smiling a bit. Most of these are wishes I could do if I grew up more. (17yrs old) The artwork looks amazing and keep up the great work. Also with the 20th line I think you misspelled "Vegetables" and put it down as "Wedgetables". -GTG345
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this great poem and at the end it got me smiling a bit. Most of these are wishes I could do if I grew up more. (17yrs old) The artwork looks amazing and keep up the great work. Also with the 20th line I think you misspelled "Vegetables" and put it down as "Wedgetables". -GTG345
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Yes, I did. On purpose. Just a throwback to youth. I always liked pronouncing them with a ?w.? Lol Thank you.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
These vividly descriptive line reflect the desires of one who had always wanted to absorb the world--without limits and borders. From hula hoop to hulu tv--clever. A note on the "w" word would've been helpful.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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These vividly descriptive line reflect the desires of one who had always wanted to absorb the world--without limits and borders. From hula hoop to hulu tv--clever. A note on the "w" word would've been helpful.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Yes, I know.
I just like ?wedgetables?
Lol
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive, and creative. I especially
liked the last 4 lines! The poem flows and connects well. These words were enjoyable to read. The artwork is lovely and goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive, and creative. I especially
liked the last 4 lines! The poem flows and connects well. These words were enjoyable to read. The artwork is lovely and goes well with these words.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Janet Foor
I love your list of "Everything" Doug. I smiled reading it as I think I can identify with most of it. You said a short review of everything and I'm sure your are like me and that list could go on and on.
I enjoyed reading your list.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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I love your list of "Everything" Doug. I smiled reading it as I think I can identify with most of it. You said a short review of everything and I'm sure your are like me and that list could go on and on.
I enjoyed reading your list.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Ha ha. Yes, I'm afraid it could.
Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we are young we want everything life can give us and as we grow older we realise we need less personal possessions and more human contact, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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When we are young we want everything life can give us and as we grow older we realise we need less personal possessions and more human contact, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from dragonpoet
Doug,
You make a long list of things you want, but it seems your love is last on the list. Does that make her the most of least important thing. You list a lot of things both worldly and heavenly. Which one is the person you want.
Or is she both.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Doug,
You make a long list of things you want, but it seems your love is last on the list. Does that make her the most of least important thing. You list a lot of things both worldly and heavenly. Which one is the person you want.
Or is she both.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Both, of course!
Ha ha.
Thank you, Joan.
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You're welcome, Doug.
Joan
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's quite a list you have there, Victor. I am sure it was intentional, but what are "Wedgetables"? Are you referring to the Marvel Comic character, Silver Surfer?
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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That's quite a list you have there, Victor. I am sure it was intentional, but what are "Wedgetables"? Are you referring to the Marvel Comic character, Silver Surfer?
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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I love the Silver Surfer.
Have his very first annual comic.
Wedgetables are the cosmic vegetables
Galactus inhales. Lol
