Everything
A short review of everything.41 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Every time I see your name in my PM box, I smile because I know I am going to get to read a great poem. I was not disappointed. Thank you for sharing this fun and airy poem. I think we all want pretty much the same thing. Although, I 'm pretty sure 'Wedgetables' should be vegetables???)
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Every time I see your name in my PM box, I smile because I know I am going to get to read a great poem. I was not disappointed. Thank you for sharing this fun and airy poem. I think we all want pretty much the same thing. Although, I 'm pretty sure 'Wedgetables' should be vegetables???)
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Yes, maam.
Wedgetables are grown where I come from.
LOL
Doug
Comment from royowen
This is very cute dear Doug, you are an asset my friend. I love the fact that you're human, and merely want these basic necessities that bring comfort from moment to moment, well done friend, good to see you alive and well, bless you Roy
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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This is very cute dear Doug, you are an asset my friend. I love the fact that you're human, and merely want these basic necessities that bring comfort from moment to moment, well done friend, good to see you alive and well, bless you Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Smiling,
thank you, Roy.
You are also an asset my friend.
Never forget that.
Doug
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Bless you
Comment from mermaids
Excellent free verse form and use of words that make me go aaaaah... You have a light feel in your poem and I like all the various stuff you mention. This is a poem that brings forth emotion and feelings.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Excellent free verse form and use of words that make me go aaaaah... You have a light feel in your poem and I like all the various stuff you mention. This is a poem that brings forth emotion and feelings.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Smiling,
thank you.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Very succinctly, you made what might appear to be an autobiographical poem from your selected list of what you wanted. Did you mean vegetables rather than wedgetables or is that to represent a child's spelling? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Very succinctly, you made what might appear to be an autobiographical poem from your selected list of what you wanted. Did you mean vegetables rather than wedgetables or is that to represent a child's spelling? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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I meant wedgetables.
Just an idiosyncrasy of mine.
Smiling,
Doug
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is fun. This is adventuresome. This is all about you (again). You, and rightly so, end with the word "me." All you need is a little 'at' me to complete the package. You end with smiling, me and I think you want to say smiling, at me, don't you? If you haven't thought about it then I would suggest you do.
This is just a suggestion. Please, take it with a grain of salt. Nice imagery and your style never get old!
Thanks for the lift of spirits!
Jesse
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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This is fun. This is adventuresome. This is all about you (again). You, and rightly so, end with the word "me." All you need is a little 'at' me to complete the package. You end with smiling, me and I think you want to say smiling, at me, don't you? If you haven't thought about it then I would suggest you do.
This is just a suggestion. Please, take it with a grain of salt. Nice imagery and your style never get old!
Thanks for the lift of spirits!
Jesse
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Ah Jesse,
soo wonderful just to hear from
you again. I thank you, and hope
all is well in your world.
Doug
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So, Doug, no comment on my suggestion then.
My world is fine.
Jesse
Comment from karenina
I give up. What is a "Wedgetable?"
Smiling here...
Light and airy look of wanted whimsies...
Sealed with a kiss with your final lines....
It's all better with your significant other!
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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I give up. What is a "Wedgetable?"
Smiling here...
Light and airy look of wanted whimsies...
Sealed with a kiss with your final lines....
It's all better with your significant other!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Wedgetables are what other people
call...vegetables. Lol
Thank you,
Doug
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Silly me!
Of course!
"Give peas a chance!"
(Great anti-war song....)
Smile.....
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Everything, gives a sort of nonlinear list of all the items which would make up "everything". The list seems to bounce around in time, but finally ends with a "you" and a "me".
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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This poem, Everything, gives a sort of nonlinear list of all the items which would make up "everything". The list seems to bounce around in time, but finally ends with a "you" and a "me".
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from Whitewave
Victor,
That's quite a list! Lots of creative energy in there. No harm in wanting but, as you know, wanting doesn't make it happen. Dreaming is the beginning of manifesting, so 'up on your bike' and go get it done, one at a time in order of your choice.
Smiling, me too.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Victor,
That's quite a list! Lots of creative energy in there. No harm in wanting but, as you know, wanting doesn't make it happen. Dreaming is the beginning of manifesting, so 'up on your bike' and go get it done, one at a time in order of your choice.
Smiling, me too.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A neat list poem. The short lines emphasizes the list idea and the outline feeling of most lists. The list is all common things that people desire. The final line adds a touch of warmth and humor. The poem flows well and stays on track.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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A neat list poem. The short lines emphasizes the list idea and the outline feeling of most lists. The list is all common things that people desire. The final line adds a touch of warmth and humor. The poem flows well and stays on track.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much.
Doug
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You are welcome.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
It is a nice poem to tell us you like to have everything. In reality no one can get everything one wants. the more one wants, the less happy one becomes if one cannot get it.
It is better to be contented with what one has. Under this situation, one becomes happier.
I like how you glorify everything.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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It is a nice poem to tell us you like to have everything. In reality no one can get everything one wants. the more one wants, the less happy one becomes if one cannot get it.
It is better to be contented with what one has. Under this situation, one becomes happier.
I like how you glorify everything.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you.
And...thanks for reading.
Doug
