I Begged My Many Demons
I'm a religious work in progress/one has to start somewhere26 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I read little poetry, and I certainly don't write any, but it's always nice to see those I read regularly dipping their toes in the water. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
I read little poetry, and I certainly don't write any, but it's always nice to see those I read regularly dipping their toes in the water. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Ric. I can assure you, I don't dip too often, but it is a pleasant genre to speak your mind or leak a few devils from the portals of your mind. :) Thank you for reading, my friend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am not a poet, myself, but did enjoy reading this one. You did a good job writing it. I continue being on my journey with God. Someday, I ace it and some days, I pray for His grace to cover me. Our walk with God is definitely a journey.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
I am not a poet, myself, but did enjoy reading this one. You did a good job writing it. I continue being on my journey with God. Someday, I ace it and some days, I pray for His grace to cover me. Our walk with God is definitely a journey.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Yes, it is! I ditto your journey, Barbara. Thank you for reading, and I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
Isn't God marvellous? And that He is not really willing to give us what we deserve, but that we all are blind, at least those that willing to have their eyes opened, this is beautifully written my friend, thank you for sharing part of your fabulous testimony, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
Isn't God marvellous? And that He is not really willing to give us what we deserve, but that we all are blind, at least those that willing to have their eyes opened, this is beautifully written my friend, thank you for sharing part of your fabulous testimony, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the inspiring review, Roy. Your words are always appreciated, but as a dabbler in this genre is always cherished.
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Well done John and thank you
Comment from Scott Rhodie
I think you underestimate yourself sir, this is well created and crafted and a beyond enjoyable read. I'm not in the religion camp, but I believe there is room for everyone and this is good. Well done.
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
I think you underestimate yourself sir, this is well created and crafted and a beyond enjoyable read. I'm not in the religion camp, but I believe there is room for everyone and this is good. Well done.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Scott, for a great review. Your words are inspiring and appreciated.
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No problem.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Well for someone who does not see himself a poet, I find this a remarkable and deeply personal poem searching for faith, reflecting on life direction.
The presentation is as perfect as your words.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
Well for someone who does not see himself a poet, I find this a remarkable and deeply personal poem searching for faith, reflecting on life direction.
The presentation is as perfect as your words.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Mary, for the kind words and the stars. Your comments are inspiring and appreciated.
Comment from Annmuma
I believe a lot of us have followed the path you outlined, but we never, ever become unsalvageable. Unconditional Love that is truly 'unconditional' cannot really be fully understood on this side of the curtain. Great piece. Glad you shared it. ann
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
I believe a lot of us have followed the path you outlined, but we never, ever become unsalvageable. Unconditional Love that is truly 'unconditional' cannot really be fully understood on this side of the curtain. Great piece. Glad you shared it. ann
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Ann, for the great review.