haiku (two lone palms)
A Contest Entry37 total reviews
Comment from Whitewave
C2,
A striking picture with the two lone palms, standing tall and proud like sentinels, the glow of dusk behind and the ever watchful moon above.
Perhaps they will disappear into the blackness of night where oblivion awaits, but starlight also awaits and morning is not far away.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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C2,
A striking picture with the two lone palms, standing tall and proud like sentinels, the glow of dusk behind and the ever watchful moon above.
Perhaps they will disappear into the blackness of night where oblivion awaits, but starlight also awaits and morning is not far away.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank youfor reading my poem and for yourkind review.
Comment from Janet Foor
Congratulations on your 50th post. Definitely a milestone.
I enjoyed your haiku. The artwork is perfect to compliment your work.
Well done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Congratulations on your 50th post. Definitely a milestone.
I enjoyed your haiku. The artwork is perfect to compliment your work.
Well done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thanks Janet!
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Two Lone Palms, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, finds the last guard against tomorrow's destiny awaiting that which the new day brings.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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This haiku, Two Lone Palms, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, finds the last guard against tomorrow's destiny awaiting that which the new day brings.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Ha! At least one person got it! Thanks Bill.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello C2,
Nice piece of poetry as a 'Haiku' meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, and transparently depicting its inner sense.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
GOOD LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Hello C2,
Nice piece of poetry as a 'Haiku' meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, and transparently depicting its inner sense.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
GOOD LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
Comment from Aussie
Congratulations on All Time Best. I think you are rising in the ranks of writing and enjoying it. Good photo to compliment your Haiku. Palms are long living and found in just about every country. They are tough and withstand wicked weather. Well done and good luck with the writing contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Congratulations on All Time Best. I think you are rising in the ranks of writing and enjoying it. Good photo to compliment your Haiku. Palms are long living and found in just about every country. They are tough and withstand wicked weather. Well done and good luck with the writing contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thanks Aussie!
Comment from leather
What unbelievable colors are seen in that photo? Fantastic.
I'm glad you wrote about the two palms, not the parking lot full of cars.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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What unbelievable colors are seen in that photo? Fantastic.
I'm glad you wrote about the two palms, not the parking lot full of cars.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thank you leather!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
idk about oblivion??? They aren't going to their demise. What about obscurity which will be theirs once the final rays fade away. It would maintain the needed seventeen syllables. But what there's may be unquestioned by others.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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idk about oblivion??? They aren't going to their demise. What about obscurity which will be theirs once the final rays fade away. It would maintain the needed seventeen syllables. But what there's may be unquestioned by others.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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In my head I saw a couple in the car watching the sunset and about to head to a bar where they intend to drink away their cares. Thanks for the read!
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Oh. I had the two palm trees thinking...
in the dark we won't be seen.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear c2! I love the imagery this short poem which deserves a bravo!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear c2! I love the imagery this short poem which deserves a bravo!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Rebekka,
Thanks for the read and the thoughtful review!
Comment from Ric Myworld
I always enjoy reading Haiku poems, which I call sneeze poems. Hai--ku! So much said in so few words. Plus your picture combined just seems to fit with the poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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I always enjoy reading Haiku poems, which I call sneeze poems. Hai--ku! So much said in so few words. Plus your picture combined just seems to fit with the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Ric,
Thanks for the read and the thoughtful review!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Haiku poem writing prompt entry good job on the execution I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day. Congrats on your 50th post.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Haiku poem writing prompt entry good job on the execution I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day. Congrats on your 50th post.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the read and the thoughtful review!
