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No Escape

Might one die during a dream?

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Yikes! Now THAT's a horrible death!

Your imagery is fantastic: "gossamer web," "golden orb," "blue-headed fly." I like your style of writing a lot. Good luck with the contest. (Do they give awards posthumously, though?!)

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    Not sure, but it would be nice to be noted in an obituary. Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Great response to the prompt. With the metaphor of the spider web, for me, you conveyed the inevitability of death that, perhaps, comes upon us like a dream. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
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The ending is both tragic and hilariously stated. "Nevertheless, I died."

Really, no need to mince words when you have only 100 to use.

This is a creative piece for the 100-word flash.

Take care,
Erika

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.