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Dystonia

The unexpected

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash writing prompt contest about Logan's dystonia. Poor baby angel. I hope he's okay now.

Good word count and with nice presentation. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
    Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Is there a cure for this? I hope with medication he can overcome his dystopia. I learned about it here and I loved the photograph of this young boy with his future ahead of him. An endearing write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
    Thank you there is no cure but treatable .
Comment from prettybluebirds
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My heart goes out to your family in this tragedy. It is so sad when a baby is born with abnormalities of any kind. I will pray that he recovers enough to live a normal life. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thank you
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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I hope Logan can be cured of this. I know this is stressing you all out. Just think positive and keep believing he will get better. Everyday research is being done for all sorts of illness. I pray this child gets well soon.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thank you so much.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 09-Jul-2022
    You are welcome.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
    Thank you so much it is very stressful.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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In 100 words you have depicted a heartbreaking condition and the possible causes to his dystonia. I too hope treatments will allow him to live a normal life. I'm right there with you.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
    Thank you so much.