Devoted, But Honest
What challenges us also strengthens us.28 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You have good thoughts in the poem about
being heard and having trust in the response.
-A good concluding line that shows
it isn't always easy, but we have the faith to try.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You have good thoughts in the poem about
being heard and having trust in the response.
-A good concluding line that shows
it isn't always easy, but we have the faith to try.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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The teacher in me loves the efficient, organized way you devise your reviews. Thanks for your encouragement and for the well-wishes for the contest! Very much appreciated.
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A nice reply from one teacher to another! I am glad you liked the style of my review, and you are very welcome for the encouragement. I look forward to seeing who you are.
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I think you will be very surprised!!
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😊😊
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are meaningful, true, interesting, thought provoking,
descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem especially
the last line. As it really is hard sometimes, when I receive God's answer!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome. Love the
words above the title! Great Poem!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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The author's words are meaningful, true, interesting, thought provoking,
descriptive and creative. I pondered on the words of this poem especially
the last line. As it really is hard sometimes, when I receive God's answer!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome. Love the
words above the title! Great Poem!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I so appreciate this encouraging review, harmony13. Thank you! Did you ever hear the joke that's similar to this? The child says to his parent, "I prayed to G-d, but He didn't answer me." "Yes, He did," the parent replied. "He said 'no.'"
THAT's when it gets hard, for sure!!
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No I never heard this - Great statement! I like it! Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
LOL. I really enjoyed the good sense of humour here. Yes sometimes we don't always get the answer we're looking for.
Excellent entry into this contest, and best of luck with the voters. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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LOL. I really enjoyed the good sense of humour here. Yes sometimes we don't always get the answer we're looking for.
Excellent entry into this contest, and best of luck with the voters. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Coming from you, this praise means the world. Thank you, Gloria. xo
Comment from RodG
What a great picture you chose to accompany your short poem. I can almost hear the little boy speaking to the Lord and I love his candor. This entry should really appeal to voters. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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What a great picture you chose to accompany your short poem. I can almost hear the little boy speaking to the Lord and I love his candor. This entry should really appeal to voters. Rod
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Is it wrong of me to pray you're right?
Thanks for the review; I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from mermaids
An excellent little poem that communicates to God. Faith comes through clearly and the reader feels the intensity of what you are saying. Excellent use of words here.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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An excellent little poem that communicates to God. Faith comes through clearly and the reader feels the intensity of what you are saying. Excellent use of words here.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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What a super nice, very encouraging review! Thank you for letting me hear from you.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What a great statement made in this short-form poem. Everything you needed to get across to the reader was done so in just a few words. Nice job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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What a great statement made in this short-form poem. Everything you needed to get across to the reader was done so in just a few words. Nice job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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You wonderfully encouraging reviewer, you! Thank you for these warm and thoughtful comments. I appreciate them very, very much.
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You're welcome!
Comment from royowen
That part is hard, even with God there is that cringe factor when we doubt Him with healing for instance, does that extend to salvation, beautifully written my friend, great post, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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That part is hard, even with God there is that cringe factor when we doubt Him with healing for instance, does that extend to salvation, beautifully written my friend, great post, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate your sentiments and encouragement.
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Well done
Comment from jessizero
I loved your 5-7-5 poem on faith. You are absolutely right about the last part being hard, but we still must try. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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I loved your 5-7-5 poem on faith. You are absolutely right about the last part being hard, but we still must try. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the positive feedback and the well-wishes. Both are very much appreciated.
