Clutch Bag
When life was simpler.7 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is lovely story with an old-world feel. You've given the feel of a space, the smells, the look, and the textures lending a great deal of authenticity to your writing.
A beautifully crafted story. The author has treated us to the buttery scent of nostalgia, of being in good company and stoked, as well, our memories as to the way it was.
I love this piece celebrating screen artists and its powerful images of movie theatres and motion pictures.
Very enjoyable story.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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This is lovely story with an old-world feel. You've given the feel of a space, the smells, the look, and the textures lending a great deal of authenticity to your writing.
A beautifully crafted story. The author has treated us to the buttery scent of nostalgia, of being in good company and stoked, as well, our memories as to the way it was.
I love this piece celebrating screen artists and its powerful images of movie theatres and motion pictures.
Very enjoyable story.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much in your time of reading and the comment. It's greatly appreciated.
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My pleasure🌸
Comment from Annmuma
I love this story! The imagery is outstanding and I can smell the smell of an old theater. I've been there and it was pleasant to make the trip again with you. Great contest entry. ann
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I love this story! The imagery is outstanding and I can smell the smell of an old theater. I've been there and it was pleasant to make the trip again with you. Great contest entry. ann
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I greatly appreciate it.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I had to give this a six! So well deserved! You have touched all of my movie senses in this piece and my heart. What a beautifully well-written story. I could see her too, as you described. Perhaps she was there. Touching, Rosita. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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I had to give this a six! So well deserved! You have touched all of my movie senses in this piece and my heart. What a beautifully well-written story. I could see her too, as you described. Perhaps she was there. Touching, Rosita. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022
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Oh my gosh. Thank you for the kindness and the review. It's a great memory for me
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is gorgeous - a beautiful dedication not just to a remembered person but to an era when things were - not simpler as such - but perhaps more romantic. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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This is gorgeous - a beautiful dedication not just to a remembered person but to an era when things were - not simpler as such - but perhaps more romantic. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Hey thank you for reading. When I decided to enter the contest I thought 250 was a lot. But nope. Had to condense. Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A ghostly write and I loved the old cinemas and I miss them. I have spent hours during my youth and growing up in cinemas and they are a place of sanctuary where you are entertained in the dark and taken to brave new worlds, I was with you on this journey and we are never alone, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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A ghostly write and I loved the old cinemas and I miss them. I have spent hours during my youth and growing up in cinemas and they are a place of sanctuary where you are entertained in the dark and taken to brave new worlds, I was with you on this journey and we are never alone, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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I'm glad I was the generations that could experience the old school lifestyle. I miss it and try to incorporate the quiet times into my every day hullabaloo. Thank your for reading
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a touching and well-written story. You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. Your story is sad yet not. I enjoyed reading the writing. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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This is a touching and well-written story. You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. Your story is sad yet not. I enjoyed reading the writing. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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/thank you so much for reading and commenting. You often think 250 words is a lot but it really isnt.
Comment from jessizero
This piece remembering your departed loved one while at the theater is very sweet and loving. It was a good 250-word piece. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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This piece remembering your departed loved one while at the theater is very sweet and loving. It was a good 250-word piece. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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/thank you so much for the read and your thoughts. It's greatly appreciated.
