haiku (dark mysteries)
haiku contest15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Val.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery.
-You create a good word picture
and mood describing this mysterious scene.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Val.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery.
-You create a good word picture
and mood describing this mysterious scene.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Pam. Love your input
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You are welcome! I like your poetry😊
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Enjoyed it anyway, although the syllable count confused until seeing your note. As a child, I used to wonder what was about to come out of the smog as it was so bad back in the sixties. You never knew. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Enjoyed it anyway, although the syllable count confused until seeing your note. As a child, I used to wonder what was about to come out of the smog as it was so bad back in the sixties. You never knew. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this very interesting review. Yes, haiku has changed dramatically over the years
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No problem.
Comment from Blue Dreams
Elegantly written with precise wording is mysterious and enchanting and leaves the reader with a vivid picture of its true meaning I thoroughly enjoyed this work of art nothing to advise
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Elegantly written with precise wording is mysterious and enchanting and leaves the reader with a vivid picture of its true meaning I thoroughly enjoyed this work of art nothing to advise
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from Fleedleflump
This feels as though it should be read to all the characters in a horror film before it begins! We could save so many fictional lives...
I very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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This feels as though it should be read to all the characters in a horror film before it begins! We could save so many fictional lives...
I very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Exactly my intention. Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A scary sight and I agree with you it is best to keep away before we find ourselves in a mystery we regret, an eerie horror write Val, sending a shiver down my spine, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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A scary sight and I agree with you it is best to keep away before we find ourselves in a mystery we regret, an eerie horror write Val, sending a shiver down my spine, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review
