Serves Him Right
A florist gets revenge7 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
and deservingly so. Marriage must be monogamous to stay successful. It would have served him right if his car was a Volkswagon Beetle. or a Mazda m3.........
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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and deservingly so. Marriage must be monogamous to stay successful. It would have served him right if his car was a Volkswagon Beetle. or a Mazda m3.........
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
LOL, this is great. Definitely serves him right.
I enjoy your writing. I look forward to reading more.
Feel free to visit my portfolio if you ever get a minute.
Cheers,
Erika
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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LOL, this is great. Definitely serves him right.
I enjoy your writing. I look forward to reading more.
Feel free to visit my portfolio if you ever get a minute.
Cheers,
Erika
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your review. Will definitely visit your portfolio.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is hilarious. Very creative. And the truth is the guy had it coming.
Charming artwork as well.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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This is hilarious. Very creative. And the truth is the guy had it coming.
Charming artwork as well.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the review!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
There are all KINDS of levels of stupidity that Joe possesses, aren't there? Having two women, using the same florist for them both. But insulting his FLORIST? Especially on her busiest day of the year, when she's all KINDS of stressed? The man earned his fate.
SUCH a good story!! You are going to do SO well in the contest!!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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There are all KINDS of levels of stupidity that Joe possesses, aren't there? Having two women, using the same florist for them both. But insulting his FLORIST? Especially on her busiest day of the year, when she's all KINDS of stressed? The man earned his fate.
SUCH a good story!! You are going to do SO well in the contest!!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the review!
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My pleasure!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Next, Joe will be prohibited to come within so many feet of the house and car. Then served Divorce papers. The florist did a number on him.
I wonder if the mistress will take care of him?
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Next, Joe will be prohibited to come within so many feet of the house and car. Then served Divorce papers. The florist did a number on him.
I wonder if the mistress will take care of him?
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Tricky florist! That was payback for his rudeness to her, and I wonder if he realised. Well written short story in fifty words. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Tricky florist! That was payback for his rudeness to her, and I wonder if he realised. Well written short story in fifty words. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the review!
Comment from jessizero
This was a cute little story in just fifty words. I think he got what he deserved. I could be extra spiteful and wish the wife would get the car in the divorce and he would be out on the street . . . but no. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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This was a cute little story in just fifty words. I think he got what he deserved. I could be extra spiteful and wish the wife would get the car in the divorce and he would be out on the street . . . but no. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the review!
