Applause
Leaves bow down for your14 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Ahhh. This is exactly how it feels, watching those leaves whirl and twirl from branch to the new "dance floor" nestled up against the roots of their very own tree! Beautifully rendered, Wendy.
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Ahhh. This is exactly how it feels, watching those leaves whirl and twirl from branch to the new "dance floor" nestled up against the roots of their very own tree! Beautifully rendered, Wendy.
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much!
Wendy
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This one was so lovely!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Actually, you could say they dance as they fall from the limbs of the trees.
They swirl and twirl around and around before hitting the ground. They lie there and decompose, losing carbon dioxide and water into the ground. Another way to recycle the carbon cycle. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Actually, you could say they dance as they fall from the limbs of the trees.
They swirl and twirl around and around before hitting the ground. They lie there and decompose, losing carbon dioxide and water into the ground. Another way to recycle the carbon cycle. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022
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Yes, I was imagining the dance as a pirouette in the air before they hit the ground. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for reviewing.
Wendy
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You are welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Bingo. This is a good 353 which to me are hard to compete for since I am
rather loquacious when I think. Eleven words. Maybe in the future. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Bingo. This is a good 353 which to me are hard to compete for since I am
rather loquacious when I think. Eleven words. Maybe in the future. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you Tom! Greatly appreciated words, along with your good wishes.
Comment from Michaela Moore
As a tiny syllable-contained poem, this one got me. I loved the imagery you created with your diction. Plus, autumn is my favorite season, and you captured the magic of it for me perfectly. Good Luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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As a tiny syllable-contained poem, this one got me. I loved the imagery you created with your diction. Plus, autumn is my favorite season, and you captured the magic of it for me perfectly. Good Luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much Michaela! I greatly appreciate the six stars - that is very encouraging!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I did look of the Pirouette and then the poem made sense
to me. The author's poem are lovely and compliment the beauty of
fall. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words of this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I did look of the Pirouette and then the poem made sense
to me. The author's poem are lovely and compliment the beauty of
fall. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words of this poem.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you for reviewing, appreciated. Yes, a pirouette is a dance term.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I love this nature 3-5-3 poem. The syllable count is accurate. The font size is easy to read. The message makes sense and creates great imagery. The visual fits perfectly. You have had the best one so far. I am reading the entire booth. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I love this nature 3-5-3 poem. The syllable count is accurate. The font size is easy to read. The message makes sense and creates great imagery. The visual fits perfectly. You have had the best one so far. I am reading the entire booth. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much Sandra - I appreciate your very encouraging words and good wishes a great deal!.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Lovely picture and nicely placed set of words which I've no doubt will do well in the contest. It encapsulates all the requirements of nature within the syllable count. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Lovely picture and nicely placed set of words which I've no doubt will do well in the contest. It encapsulates all the requirements of nature within the syllable count. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.
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No problem.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Maybe it's the dancer teacher and choreographer in me that loves this entry the most so far. What a great concept - that it's the end of their "show" and, like a curtain, they're falling. Very imaginative. And great picture to accompany it! I bet this will do very well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Maybe it's the dancer teacher and choreographer in me that loves this entry the most so far. What a great concept - that it's the end of their "show" and, like a curtain, they're falling. Very imaginative. And great picture to accompany it! I bet this will do very well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you Rachelle. I appreciate your lovely review and good wishes.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Applause, has the right setup and sets the readers in the audience to watch the finale of the forest summer as the leaves turn color, turn in circles, and find the stage floor. Nice.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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This 3-5-3, Applause, has the right setup and sets the readers in the audience to watch the finale of the forest summer as the leaves turn color, turn in circles, and find the stage floor. Nice.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you Bill - a lovely review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a very sensual poem. Sensual in the meaning that it calls on many senses. Visual, obviously, but also sound, and tactile. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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This is a very sensual poem. Sensual in the meaning that it calls on many senses. Visual, obviously, but also sound, and tactile. Much enjoyed. Kate xx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thank you Kate. I appreciate your nice words. Glad you enjoyed it.
