Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

You have done a terrific job with the prompt, very creative.
The syllable count is perfect as well penning the appropriate topic.
You painted a nice picture by using the metaphor of dancing.
I immediately heard music playing in the background as leaves swayed to the rhythm.
Well done and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Many thanks for such an encouraging review. Greatly appreciated.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is a really cute and creative poem. I like the use of words in the writing. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to more of your work. I see this is a contest entry, so I wish you all the luck in the world.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thank you very much! I appreciate your kind review and good wishes.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes the change of seasons does bring the curtain down on the falling of leaves, beautifully written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review a great deal.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

"Leaves' last dance" makes it sound a little sad, but beautiful. I like your use of the dance and theatre imagery. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thank you very much! I appreciate your review a lot.