...of thought
Written when I was 1612 total reviews
Comment from royowen
It sounds like the rumination of youth, the confused stream of consciousness on the awakement of youth, kicked out of the emotional and rudimentary security of childhood, that scary in between place betwixt puberty and the long and winding road, beautifully written though, language wasn't a problem, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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It sounds like the rumination of youth, the confused stream of consciousness on the awakement of youth, kicked out of the emotional and rudimentary security of childhood, that scary in between place betwixt puberty and the long and winding road, beautifully written though, language wasn't a problem, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Roy :-). There was always that questing mind, hidden beneath the hormones. I enjoy reading my old poetry and seeing the drive there! So glad you liked it.
Mike
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i can see that, lots of questions, few answers
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. What amazes me is the quality of this poem. Your written poem is poem like. When I attempt a poem at 68 it reads like a child's poem. GRRRR
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. What amazes me is the quality of this poem. Your written poem is poem like. When I attempt a poem at 68 it reads like a child's poem. GRRRR
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022
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I've always had an 'urge' to write poetry. They really do come pouring out of me. Over the years, I've got better at shaping them as they flow. Now prose is where I get to exorcise the stories that live alongside the words, and try to limit how much poetry I allow in, lol. Thanks so much, Barbara :-)
Mike
