Time Will Not Erase
1-6-1 poem about remembrance.6 total reviews
Comment from Michaela Moore
Wow! This got me. Right in the heart. And it works for all traumatic memories, not just the one you pictured. Such deep and lovely weaving of words that are ripe with perfect emotion.
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Wow! This got me. Right in the heart. And it works for all traumatic memories, not just the one you pictured. Such deep and lovely weaving of words that are ripe with perfect emotion.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oy. This one's a heart-wrencher. You really chose your words WELL, Mystery Poet. I read it and felt prickles all around my eyelids. Go you. The photo just sealed the deal. Best of luck to you; I hope the voters love it, too.
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Oy. This one's a heart-wrencher. You really chose your words WELL, Mystery Poet. I read it and felt prickles all around my eyelids. Go you. The photo just sealed the deal. Best of luck to you; I hope the voters love it, too.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I like this 1-6-1 poem. The syllable count is accurate. The font size is easy to read. The message makes sense. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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I like this 1-6-1 poem. The syllable count is accurate. The font size is easy to read. The message makes sense. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with very good rhymes and a theme most relevant in these times.
Excellent picture choice too.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with very good rhymes and a theme most relevant in these times.
Excellent picture choice too.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
Comment from mermaids
Excellent 1-6-1 form that captures in few words the impact and loss that war brings forth. I admire your use of rhyming words that add to the strength of your theme.
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Excellent 1-6-1 form that captures in few words the impact and loss that war brings forth. I admire your use of rhyming words that add to the strength of your theme.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
Oh, great use of deep to double up on meaning and bring physical depth as well as emotional texture to the piece. What a brilliant way to use this ultra short form.
Mike
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Oh, great use of deep to double up on meaning and bring physical depth as well as emotional texture to the piece. What a brilliant way to use this ultra short form.
Mike
Comment Written 13-Jul-2022
