Can't Unsee It
Memorable for all the wrong reasons30 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
idk. Yours may be better but when I exchanged the first and last words it seems effective. What do you think? Good luck. Anyone that can take on an eight word challenge is talented.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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idk. Yours may be better but when I exchanged the first and last words it seems effective. What do you think? Good luck. Anyone that can take on an eight word challenge is talented.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Very good point! Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I'm really impressed in how you used this very limiting form and told a whole story. And that picture is adorable, too! Yes, if a little one were to see certain scenes, it could be shocking! Great title, too! Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Lol! I'm really impressed in how you used this very limiting form and told a whole story. And that picture is adorable, too! Yes, if a little one were to see certain scenes, it could be shocking! Great title, too! Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I totally appreciate this. Thanks!
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Ties in nicely with the poem, I think! Good use of the title which has taken you down one or two roads until you see the picture. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Ties in nicely with the poem, I think! Good use of the title which has taken you down one or two roads until you see the picture. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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thanks very much!
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No problem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here as kids are inquisitive and want to know everything and see everything and only a locked door can keep them out! A fun post, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here as kids are inquisitive and want to know everything and see everything and only a locked door can keep them out! A fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thanks! Pretty much every parent knows this from first-hand experience, it seems!!
Comment from karenina
Hah!
Definitely a must-have on the "to do" checklist...
Lock the door!
I think many a child has come running in and...
Well!
It's hard to convince him or her that "Mom and dad were just tickling one another."
(grin)
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Hah!
Definitely a must-have on the "to do" checklist...
Lock the door!
I think many a child has come running in and...
Well!
It's hard to convince him or her that "Mom and dad were just tickling one another."
(grin)
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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My friend once used the terms "wrestling". lol (She had boys)
Thank you for the fun review.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thanks very much!
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice artwork chosen to illustrate a poem which seems to be abot a child walking on on his parents having sex.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Nice artwork chosen to illustrate a poem which seems to be abot a child walking on on his parents having sex.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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...or just naked...or dressed up like Santa and Mrs. Claus and auditioning for the Naughty List...When you're a writer, Joan, the possibilities are endless, right??!!
Thanks for the positive feedback. I appreciate it very much.
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You?re very welcome.
You are so right about open interpretation of poems
Joan
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Not keeping those doors would be something not to be forgotten. Sometimes children are nosey or just do not think about knocking. This has happened to many of us. Thank you for sharing this great awareness. Have a great upcoming weekend.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Not keeping those doors would be something not to be forgotten. Sometimes children are nosey or just do not think about knocking. This has happened to many of us. Thank you for sharing this great awareness. Have a great upcoming weekend.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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I think you're right on the $$$. I'm pretty sure every grown-up we know has SOME kind of story about this!!
Thank you for the really nice review. Very much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your poem made me smile. I can imagine a few things this young boy must've discovered.
It's excellent the way you put humor in this great 1-6-1 poem.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Author,
Your poem made me smile. I can imagine a few things this young boy must've discovered.
It's excellent the way you put humor in this great 1-6-1 poem.
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Thanks! I'm pretty sure every parent on the planet has experienced this situation at least once...in fact, it should never be MORE than once, probably, right? That is one lesson that should NOT need repeating!! ha ha ha.
Thanks for the terrific review.
Comment from harmony13
Great 1-6-1 poem! The artwork is so awesome! The author's words
goes so well with this artwork! The author's words say it all! The
poem flows and connects well. The color scheme with the artwork
compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Great 1-6-1 poem! The artwork is so awesome! The author's words
goes so well with this artwork! The author's words say it all! The
poem flows and connects well. The color scheme with the artwork
compliments this poem.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022
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Wow!! You just made me feel SO very good. Thanks for this really nice review--specific, helpful, and encouraging. The Reviewer's Trifecta!!
