Pure gold
The value and preciousness of ...25 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
What true words you have written, Wendy. Great picture and good use of eight words. How precious are the words, "I love you" from a spouse, a child, or just a good friend.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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What true words you have written, Wendy. Great picture and good use of eight words. How precious are the words, "I love you" from a spouse, a child, or just a good friend.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Exactly right Anne! Thank you for your wonderful words of encouragement. Much appreciated.
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy
Comment from dragonpoet
Wendy,
The silence in the sunset and of prayer can be golden. But you are right silence in the face of love is not. Always let those feelings out.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Wendy,
The silence in the sunset and of prayer can be golden. But you are right silence in the face of love is not. Always let those feelings out.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much Joan. I appreciate your lovely review. Yes, if one feels it one should say it. If it's not said people have doubts if they are loved, which is sad.
Wendy
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You are most kindly welcome, Wendy.
Joan
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a valuable maxim that will serve many young children well, if the adults can be made to understand its importance. That's the rub, isn't it. Kate xx
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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This is a valuable maxim that will serve many young children well, if the adults can be made to understand its importance. That's the rub, isn't it. Kate xx
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Yes, adults need to take this on board. Children not only need to hear it but see it modelled. So right!Thanks so much for a super review.
Wendy
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
Thanks for this "so true" poem and your author words at the end. I like it, but somehow I feel this sentiment could use more words. Try it again in a longer format perhaps. Still, in 8 words you've said a lot and it works.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thanks for this "so true" poem and your author words at the end. I like it, but somehow I feel this sentiment could use more words. Try it again in a longer format perhaps. Still, in 8 words you've said a lot and it works.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Yes, I could write an expanded poem on this, or even a book. But I entered a contest for eight words or fewer, and the aim of such a task was to make the reader stop and think "I want more", so I think I fulfilled what I set out to do. But I was disappointed to lose a star for it. However, I appreciate your taking the time to review, so thank you.
Wendy
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I realize for this prompt you were limited by the word count. I only meant to suggest that you could try another piece based on the same prompt, but without the word count restrictions. I didn't deduct a star for it being short, I just felt that it wasn't quite as engaging as some of your other short poems and they can't all be 5 star, right? I am fond of all your work and always enjoy reading what you have to say. Katie
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Oh thank you! You are probably right. It hit me a bit, as I wrote because of pain, and wanted it short so as to not have to expand it. I did write a full piece one time, not a poem, but it was a very difficult thing to write because of the resurgence of a lot of hurt. We'll see. Thanks for replying - I do appreciate it.
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Your wisdom is shining through loud and clear. I enjoyed reading. Yes, children need to hear the words, 'I love you' and they need actions that show that love. Good luck with the contest. I'm curious what caused this poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Your wisdom is shining through loud and clear. I enjoyed reading. Yes, children need to hear the words, 'I love you' and they need actions that show that love. Good luck with the contest. I'm curious what caused this poem.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thank you Barbara for a super review. Glad you enjoyed it. The prompt was not hearing those words ever, in my own childhood. Turned it around for my children. (My mother still does not ever tell me she loves me.)
Wendy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The cliche "Silence is golden" proves false more often than true. You're right in saying that feelings of love need to be expressed. You have made excellent use of your few words.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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The cliche "Silence is golden" proves false more often than true. You're right in saying that feelings of love need to be expressed. You have made excellent use of your few words.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much Janice! I appreciate your review very much.
Wendy
Comment from Pantygynt
A case perhaps when words do speak louder than actions as the latter tend to get taken for granted, but hearing those words brings one up short. We suddenly realise what it means to be loved.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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A case perhaps when words do speak louder than actions as the latter tend to get taken for granted, but hearing those words brings one up short. We suddenly realise what it means to be loved.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Although some people find those three words hard to express, they are pure gold to a hearer, to know s/he is loved. Many Thanks for reviewing.
Wendy
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love that you've counterpointed these - silence can be used in many ways and take many forms, but I Love You is never a bad thing - it's always a positive. This could have fit in the cliche contest too :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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I love that you've counterpointed these - silence can be used in many ways and take many forms, but I Love You is never a bad thing - it's always a positive. This could have fit in the cliche contest too :-)
Mike
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you Mike. I am so glad you enjoyed this one, and I greatly appreciate your review.
Wendy
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
That words would means so much to a child. Of all my years, my dad told me once he loved me, and that was in 1979. And the only reason he said it was that we were talking on the phone about something mom had done to him. And at the end of the call, I told him I loved him.
I never knew my dad. And he lived there. At home, he acted as if he hated me. He would find something wrong with me to beat on me. I have been beat with belts, hickory sticks and a broom. Hurt by cruel words.
From the age of four. I remember them all. I got married at age 16 to escape home. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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That words would means so much to a child. Of all my years, my dad told me once he loved me, and that was in 1979. And the only reason he said it was that we were talking on the phone about something mom had done to him. And at the end of the call, I told him I loved him.
I never knew my dad. And he lived there. At home, he acted as if he hated me. He would find something wrong with me to beat on me. I have been beat with belts, hickory sticks and a broom. Hurt by cruel words.
From the age of four. I remember them all. I got married at age 16 to escape home. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you Carolyn, for the beautiful and personal review, and for your valued gift of six stars. My heart aches so much for your difficult childhood, the abuse and lack of love - sounds even worse than mine, which is what prompted this one.
Wendy
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You are welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Wendy,
Really good message! I hope everyone will consider printing this out and taping it to their mirror. It's THAT important!! Sometimes I think we may tend to undervalue those three tiny words. That's a horrible shame. Thanks!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Wendy,
Really good message! I hope everyone will consider printing this out and taping it to their mirror. It's THAT important!! Sometimes I think we may tend to undervalue those three tiny words. That's a horrible shame. Thanks!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much Robyn. Yes, we don't always realise what pure gold they are to a listener's ears. Thank you for the amazing six stars. A great encouragement and a valued gift!
Wendy
