A Display of Emotion
Farewelling a valued colleague. (75 words)20 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love that woman. The way it seems to roll right off her tongue. I hope I am that witty when I am older. This was a wonderful little piece that left me with a smile.
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I love that woman. The way it seems to roll right off her tongue. I hope I am that witty when I am older. This was a wonderful little piece that left me with a smile.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a witty retort from Mildred! I admire people who can comeback with such witty answers. Well done, LisaMay. A good bit of humor from an early Monday morning post. Nancy:)
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What a witty retort from Mildred! I admire people who can comeback with such witty answers. Well done, LisaMay. A good bit of humor from an early Monday morning post. Nancy:)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
Comment from Wendy G
How quick-witted she was! That's a fun story for the flash fiction! Well written too. Love the accompanying image! Sending you best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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How quick-witted she was! That's a fun story for the flash fiction! Well written too. Love the accompanying image! Sending you best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile here with Mildred's sense of humour and your short flash fiction is sure to be a winner Lisa. You are funny and you brought a smile to my Monday morning here, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here with Mildred's sense of humour and your short flash fiction is sure to be a winner Lisa. You are funny and you brought a smile to my Monday morning here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is great. I love the humor. It is funny, creative and oh so clever.
This has got to be a contender.
Good luck in the contest
Best wishes
Mary
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This is great. I love the humor. It is funny, creative and oh so clever.
This has got to be a contender.
Good luck in the contest
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
Comment from royowen
I love your ambiguous post Jenny, language is funny, and for the "sophisticated" non innocent like mine there's probably only one conclusion one can draw from Mildred's stated, but my young grandchildren probably wouldn't, very clever, blessings and good luck, blessings Roy
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I love your ambiguous post Jenny, language is funny, and for the "sophisticated" non innocent like mine there's probably only one conclusion one can draw from Mildred's stated, but my young grandchildren probably wouldn't, very clever, blessings and good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the punch line! The only thing that struck me right away was how you started out saying Mildred was retiring and was in declining years and then you said that the director was grateful for Jane's work so I don't get how Mildred became Jane?!? Am I reading this wrong? Did I miss something?
Anyway, great story with wonderful humor.
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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I love the punch line! The only thing that struck me right away was how you started out saying Mildred was retiring and was in declining years and then you said that the director was grateful for Jane's work so I don't get how Mildred became Jane?!? Am I reading this wrong? Did I miss something?
Anyway, great story with wonderful humor.
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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ooops! I changed her name at the last minute from Jane to Mildred - a more old-fashioned name - but neglected to change the other places. Thanks for your review and for catching my error.
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Always glad to help!
You would do the same for me.
Jesse
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I would indeed.
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I knew you would.
Comment from jessizero
This piece of flash fiction was hilarious! You had a great surprise ending, and you kept it to 75 words. Thank you for the laugh and for sharing your story here. Best wishes to you.
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This piece of flash fiction was hilarious! You had a great surprise ending, and you kept it to 75 words. Thank you for the laugh and for sharing your story here. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I knew the moment I read the word "mounted" the first time that I would see it again as your punchline, you naughty little minx. Still, it was a good read and will make for a fantastic entry in the contest...no doubt, as always, "the one to beat." The picture, of course, seals the deal. Good luck.
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I knew the moment I read the word "mounted" the first time that I would see it again as your punchline, you naughty little minx. Still, it was a good read and will make for a fantastic entry in the contest...no doubt, as always, "the one to beat." The picture, of course, seals the deal. Good luck.
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my, what a quip! That should have brought a loud guffaw from all the listeners at the farewell party. Good to see you. Don't know if you were just entering contests but haven't seen a post from your for a while. This one has your typical fun sense of humor. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Oh my, what a quip! That should have brought a loud guffaw from all the listeners at the farewell party. Good to see you. Don't know if you were just entering contests but haven't seen a post from your for a while. This one has your typical fun sense of humor. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
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Thanks for reviewing. I've been crazy busy running art workshops for kids during recent school holidays, so not reviewing or writing much... I'll be writing about it eventually.
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💖 Good! Looking forward to it.
