Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Spring writing prompt contest. I love the gif picture!

A beautiful poem about spring cleaning. I hate cleaning but it has to get done. (((sigh))))

I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.

Great presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.

Good luck in the contest.
Well done.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022

Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem about spring and spring cleaning you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Teri

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review, it's so appreciated. :)

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

This is a poem that is so entertaining- a lovely, lighthearted look at a time-honored Spring activity 'Spring Cleaning' and Mom's good advice is at its heart- and the closing stanza reminds us of Spring's scent-filled joys

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022

Thank you for this exceptional review and for your kind words...I appreciate it so much. :)

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I remember helping with the spring clean when I was young, wondering what the point was in cleaning the parts nobody ever sees, but instilled nevertheless with the belief in its importance. In adulthood, I decided that spring cleaning day was the 29th of February which, while admittedly a bit early, takes a little of the sting away.

I very much enjoyed your poem :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022

That's a great date for it! Why didn't I think of that? Thank you for this nice review. :)

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a Spirit Writing prompt entry.
Rich in theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)