Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I enjoyed the narrative with the wonderful descriptions. Good mix of narrative with dialogue. Enjoyable story to read. Nice work. Excellent author notes for reference :)

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

I was afraid it was too long, but nobody said anything. Thanks again.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Another wonderful chapter, dear Papa. I love the way you depict evil and the red eyes. I imagine them the same as you. The battle between good and evil is playing out on the world stage as never before. An encouraging write.

Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

Hi, Sally. Thank you for your kind words!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

It is so good to see you are back, Mike. I do love your Gabriel Hope stories and this one was very exciting, although very long. Cal is wounded! I am sure Michael's Tallit will save her. Well done Mike. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Hi, Nancy. Thank you for your kind words!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I'm glad to see you finally getting back around to posting another chapter of this book that I've enjoyed so much. I've missed your reading and review over the summer. But I hope you've had a nice break. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022

Hi, Ric. Thank you for your kind words!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike