Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Life is a minefield these days and learning to navigate is not easy and some fall by the way side and some cross swords withe law in an effort to live well, a poignant cleverly rhymed write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A nice view on Christianity.

The poem flows well. The rhymes are unforced. The narrative stays on point. The language is plain, but forceful. The last verse sums up the narrative well.

Thanks for a good read.

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I love how you bring everything back in balance and reunite the peace: "We each are so precious in the eyes of the Lord,
worth being cherished and wholly adored.
Let's try to deserve it, let's live in His light,
for if we believe it, it's worth doing right." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2022