Blessed Brother /part 8
Satan's transformation16 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
John, this is a good ending. But you posted it on Saturday, so I am out of sixs, still, it was a good series, and Congratulations on post number fifty. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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John, this is a good ending. But you posted it on Saturday, so I am out of sixs, still, it was a good series, and Congratulations on post number fifty. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Hi, Terry, I can only thank you for the honorable mention of the SIX. I don't have an understanding of when they give you more sixes, but the knowledge may be beneficial, lol. Thank you, my friend.
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John, the new sixs are available at midnight eastern time on Saturday. Terry
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Thank you, Terry. Yes, I've been posting early on Saturdays Eastern time. It is now forever noted!
Comment from royowen
Well done John, you've done it, shone the value of the medallion as a purveyor, it's almost like the Ark of the Covenant with its power to change. Poor Owen, his abilities certainly diminished under the power of God. An excellent job with this my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Well done John, you've done it, shone the value of the medallion as a purveyor, it's almost like the Ark of the Covenant with its power to change. Poor Owen, his abilities certainly diminished under the power of God. An excellent job with this my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Roy. I think it's time to leave my writing devil alone and get on to other writing, lol. thanks again, my friend.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I sighed with satisfaction as this story was revealed. You penned it with a skilled hand, and it is worthy of a milestone post (a rare occurence). I particularly liked that the ledallion turned Owen into a human - what a terrible punishment on a personal level. However I do agree with him. Without evil, where is the balance? We have always had evil. Difficult to predict. Heaven on Earth? Kate xx
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I sighed with satisfaction as this story was revealed. You penned it with a skilled hand, and it is worthy of a milestone post (a rare occurence). I particularly liked that the ledallion turned Owen into a human - what a terrible punishment on a personal level. However I do agree with him. Without evil, where is the balance? We have always had evil. Difficult to predict. Heaven on Earth? Kate xx
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Kate. I'm happy you enjoyed this. I have to navigate my writing away from the devil before I am possessed, lol. Thank you for reading along. I loved having you.
Comment from Fleedleflump
There are some awesome descriptions in here, and you saved the best for the end, with Owen's body aging into dust right in front of us. Some great dialogue too, as we watch a battle of wills and wonder whether he has a point about needing evil. Really nicely done!
The font is pretty, but I did find it quite hard to read. No problem with your storytelling though :-)
Mike
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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There are some awesome descriptions in here, and you saved the best for the end, with Owen's body aging into dust right in front of us. Some great dialogue too, as we watch a battle of wills and wonder whether he has a point about needing evil. Really nicely done!
The font is pretty, but I did find it quite hard to read. No problem with your storytelling though :-)
Mike
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Mike. I thought so too on the font. I will go back in and visit that. Thanks again, Mike.
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You're one of my favourite describers :-)
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Thank you, Mike! That means a lot coming from you.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great conclusion and it looks like it comes as milestone post number 50. Congratulations. This whole series has really been a spiritual mystery and thriller. It could do well on a Christian book market. Well done.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Great conclusion and it looks like it comes as milestone post number 50. Congratulations. This whole series has really been a spiritual mystery and thriller. It could do well on a Christian book market. Well done.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Tim, for the great review. I may take that suggestion and try to run with it. I thank you for the milestone congrats.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
First congratulations you the 50-post milestone. I am happy that I was able the entire 'Blessed Brother'. I am also happy that God defeated evil. He always will. You did a great job writing this.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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First congratulations you the 50-post milestone. I am happy that I was able the entire 'Blessed Brother'. I am also happy that God defeated evil. He always will. You did a great job writing this.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I'm honored to have received six stars from you, Barbara. It was fun to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the congrats as well.
