As Day Ends
a Naani11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Gypsy. These days I envy the Speaker and Dog and that remote cabin. Rod
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A beautifully written Naani poem. The message is soothing and clear, The visual fits perfectly. The text could be a tad bigger, but overall, a good job done. Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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A beautifully written Naani poem. The message is soothing and clear, The visual fits perfectly. The text could be a tad bigger, but overall, a good job done. Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Sandra, for your high praise of my Naani.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, As Day Ends, uses four lines and twenty-two syllables to bring the poet and the pets back home for a good night to follow a pleasant day. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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This naani, As Day Ends, uses four lines and twenty-two syllables to bring the poet and the pets back home for a good night to follow a pleasant day. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing my Naani, Bill.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. A nice overall presentation. Your chosen artwork is-amazing and compliments your words nicely. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. A nice overall presentation. Your chosen artwork is-amazing and compliments your words nicely. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Joanne, for your high praise of my Naani.
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Your welcome
Comment from Wendy G
I like the peace and serenity incorporated here - all is well - beautiful nature, and the company of a loyal and loving dog as you walk back to your home, your shelter. Well done. Love it, love the alliteration, and the image also.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I like the peace and serenity incorporated here - all is well - beautiful nature, and the company of a loyal and loving dog as you walk back to your home, your shelter. Well done. Love it, love the alliteration, and the image also.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I am so pleased the peace and serenity came through for you in my Naani, Wendy. Many thanks for your kind praise and those six bright stars.
Comment from zanya
A Naani to remind us of the better things in life like savouring the close of a beautiful day and inspiring a serene frame of mind 'spiritual serenity '- thanks for lifting our spirits
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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A Naani to remind us of the better things in life like savouring the close of a beautiful day and inspiring a serene frame of mind 'spiritual serenity '- thanks for lifting our spirits
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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I am so pleased I could lift your spirits with my Naani, Zanya. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from lyenochka
I like your peaceful naani poem covering the close of day with a furry friend, Dog. Good idea to capitalize to avoid an additional syllable. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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I like your peaceful naani poem covering the close of day with a furry friend, Dog. Good idea to capitalize to avoid an additional syllable. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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So delighted you enjoyed my Naani, lyenochka. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Sally Law
This is a lovely Naani poem at the end of day. The chosen art crowns your fine work so beautifully. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sally :))
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This is a lovely Naani poem at the end of day. The chosen art crowns your fine work so beautifully. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sally :))
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the plaudits, Sally. They are much appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Short and sweet and complete, a difficult challenge met in your four liner. Congrats and best of luck in the challenge. .............................................................
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Short and sweet and complete, a difficult challenge met in your four liner. Congrats and best of luck in the challenge. .............................................................
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Tom, for sharing and praising my Naani.
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You deserved them
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice response to the prompt. A very vivid image is painted in this poem that conveys your sense of spiritual serenity and a time of surrender to God. Well done.
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Nice response to the prompt. A very vivid image is painted in this poem that conveys your sense of spiritual serenity and a time of surrender to God. Well done.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
