Would A Rabbits Foot Help?
It didn't help the rabbit!!8 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Holding
I thought this was so well done, almost Seussian in meter, and fun to read out loud, which I did, right before I voted for you in the contest! Nice work, and I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I thought this was so well done, almost Seussian in meter, and fun to read out loud, which I did, right before I voted for you in the contest! Nice work, and I wish you luck!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much, I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Good dreams for that so rare of a day; the winning lottery ticket day. I too would make sure everyone in the family is well taken care of. Then, of course, tackle any personal projects, like your mental illness one. Mine would be obesity. There is always something negative in all of our lives. Money can sure go a long way to alleviate the symptoms.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Good dreams for that so rare of a day; the winning lottery ticket day. I too would make sure everyone in the family is well taken care of. Then, of course, tackle any personal projects, like your mental illness one. Mine would be obesity. There is always something negative in all of our lives. Money can sure go a long way to alleviate the symptoms.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I appreciate this great review and your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha.. I love your entry for the Lottery Dreams writing prompt contest. I think you will get my vote.
The rhymes don't seem forced and it has a nice meter. The presentation is great and I like all the things you would do with the money. Specially a house by the sea.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Hahaha.. I love your entry for the Lottery Dreams writing prompt contest. I think you will get my vote.
The rhymes don't seem forced and it has a nice meter. The presentation is great and I like all the things you would do with the money. Specially a house by the sea.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked my poem and I appreciate this exceptional review. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You do know the odds of winning are .0000003311%, right? Maybe it would be better to drop a buck to the Salvation Army or Saint Jude. For only thirty-five cents a day.... there are so many beggars asking for donations 790 million would be a drop in the bucket... that has way to many holes. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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You do know the odds of winning are .0000003311%, right? Maybe it would be better to drop a buck to the Salvation Army or Saint Jude. For only thirty-five cents a day.... there are so many beggars asking for donations 790 million would be a drop in the bucket... that has way to many holes. :-)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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I know the odds aren't good....but a person can dream right? Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, a terrific day to you. I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow to it and the rhymes were good. I think you did a great job on the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow poet, a terrific day to you. I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow to it and the rhymes were good. I think you did a great job on the writing prompt.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from lancellot
Well, this contest is already over. Brilliant work. You nailed this with the kindness, a bit of self reward. You've addressed serious issues and demonstrated charity and personal struggles. No way Fanstorians can resist this.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Well, this contest is already over. Brilliant work. You nailed this with the kindness, a bit of self reward. You've addressed serious issues and demonstrated charity and personal struggles. No way Fanstorians can resist this.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review and you kind words....they mean a lot to me. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow! The things I would do with this kind of money! I would try my best to spread the wealth while also taking care of those I love. This truly would be life changing. Wonderful entry!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Wow! The things I would do with this kind of money! I would try my best to spread the wealth while also taking care of those I love. This truly would be life changing. Wonderful entry!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much for this fantastic review. :)
Comment from Fleedleflump
lol, I'd happily come join in with the Fanstory party :-). I like that you cover all bases - from personal conveniences to friends and family to helping those in need. You know you can publish the poetry already for free, right? ;-)
Mike
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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lol, I'd happily come join in with the Fanstory party :-). I like that you cover all bases - from personal conveniences to friends and family to helping those in need. You know you can publish the poetry already for free, right? ;-)
Mike
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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I know, but my series of poems for children require illustrations, and I'm no artist. I'm waiting until I can afford someone that draw my characters. Thank you for this nice review, I'm so appreciative of you reading my poem. :)
