Have Faith
Blended Rhyming Poem30 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Having faith in anyone's life is essential to survive. As you say, " I must enter with trust and do my part." To have trust requires confidence, knowledge and faith.
Wish everyone can enter with trust in whatever they are doing.
Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Having faith in anyone's life is essential to survive. As you say, " I must enter with trust and do my part." To have trust requires confidence, knowledge and faith.
Wish everyone can enter with trust in whatever they are doing.
Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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I agree fully with your sentiment.
Comment from Michaela Moore
Wonderful pairing with Tintern Abbey! It seems like you really dug into the writing of this poem with lots of well-thought-out musings about life. Musings that I, too, have experienced. Musings that roll along easily like a river rolls along steadily in peace. Lovely.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Wonderful pairing with Tintern Abbey! It seems like you really dug into the writing of this poem with lots of well-thought-out musings about life. Musings that I, too, have experienced. Musings that roll along easily like a river rolls along steadily in peace. Lovely.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Michaela, thank you for your review and validating comments.
Comment from Tina Crute
I cannot imagine anyone doing a finer job on this prompt! The time period, style of speaking and the rhyme scheme remind me of quality ingredients that, when well done, as they are, make a beautiful, very special treat!
I, SO, love this!
Tina
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I cannot imagine anyone doing a finer job on this prompt! The time period, style of speaking and the rhyme scheme remind me of quality ingredients that, when well done, as they are, make a beautiful, very special treat!
I, SO, love this!
Tina
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Tina, my, Wow! Thanks so much. I am very honored!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I liked this poem very much. Firstly the fact that you chose a British setting, so it felt familiar to me. Secondly because of the rhyming seqence you used. Inter-stanza rhymed all the way through. I am unfamiliar with this, probably just because I haven't read enough poetry yet. But I found it refreshing and enjoyed it. Kate xx
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I liked this poem very much. Firstly the fact that you chose a British setting, so it felt familiar to me. Secondly because of the rhyming seqence you used. Inter-stanza rhymed all the way through. I am unfamiliar with this, probably just because I haven't read enough poetry yet. But I found it refreshing and enjoyed it. Kate xx
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Kate, thank you so very much! I am a big fan of William Wordsworth and this poem lent itself to my thoughts. See you Saturday!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a good day!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Hello JLR thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a good day!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and poem to go with it.
-Thanks for sharing what you based it on.
-The imagery is very good.
-You set the scene very well in verse one
with good nature imagery.
-A good question in verse two.
-You follow that very well with the concluding verse
and give good examples of how you will do your part.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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-Nice artwork and poem to go with it.
-Thanks for sharing what you based it on.
-The imagery is very good.
-You set the scene very well in verse one
with good nature imagery.
-A good question in verse two.
-You follow that very well with the concluding verse
and give good examples of how you will do your part.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Smiling back! thank you so much, Jim
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You are welcome😊😊
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem about faith and the belief in a greater being. I liked the way it flowed and showed you conviction. Good luck in the contest and have a great week. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This is a good poem about faith and the belief in a greater being. I liked the way it flowed and showed you conviction. Good luck in the contest and have a great week. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply moving and emotional poem and I have never heard of this form before. In our darkest times we rely on our inner strength and faith to see us through, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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A deeply moving and emotional poem and I have never heard of this form before. In our darkest times we rely on our inner strength and faith to see us through, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the comments, my friend.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this poem about faith and finding faith in nature and in everyday things. I like the underlying poem - long poem about nature's beauty and finding faith.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I like this poem about faith and finding faith in nature and in everyday things. I like the underlying poem - long poem about nature's beauty and finding faith.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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JAKE, I appreciate your review Wordsworth, one of favorites, was connected to nature and God through his prolific writings. I am inspired by his work.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the
~ Blended Rhyming Poem ~ writing prompt contest.
I love Pablo Neruda poems. You did a good job incorporating it in your poem.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words. The rhyme doesn't seem forced.
Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the
~ Blended Rhyming Poem ~ writing prompt contest.
I love Pablo Neruda poems. You did a good job incorporating it in your poem.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words. The rhyme doesn't seem forced.
Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I am honored by your comments good soul!
