Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "While I Sleep ..."Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Mark Schardine
We know that life continues even if we notice nothing, and at times this aspect provokes a sense of wonder. The natural world constantly changes and evolves, and we try to understand it, or at least observe it
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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We know that life continues even if we notice nothing, and at times this aspect provokes a sense of wonder. The natural world constantly changes and evolves, and we try to understand it, or at least observe it
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, the sentiment in your poem is absolutely beautiful. It's as soft and delicate as the falling petals. I especially liked:
never ending
river of life
(Life on Earth comes from the water.)
Well-chosen photo and gorgeous presentation. A pleasure to read.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy, the sentiment in your poem is absolutely beautiful. It's as soft and delicate as the falling petals. I especially liked:
never ending
river of life
(Life on Earth comes from the water.)
Well-chosen photo and gorgeous presentation. A pleasure to read.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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You are right, life comes from water. I appreciate your insightful feedback and kind review.
Gypsy Hugs (*÷*)
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation- picture- modern Tanka- theme cherry blossoms- depicting brevity of life - flowing down the river of life - while you sleep- good imagery- good job
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I like your poem- good presentation- picture- modern Tanka- theme cherry blossoms- depicting brevity of life - flowing down the river of life - while you sleep- good imagery- good job
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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AP, Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Heather Knight
Hi Gypsy,
It's always a pleasure to read and look at your poems. They are tiny works of art.
Even though there's no rhyme (as is to be expected in a tanka), the rhythm is great thanks to the repetition of sounds: blossoms bloom, sleep/creek.
Thanks for sharing. x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Hi Gypsy,
It's always a pleasure to read and look at your poems. They are tiny works of art.
Even though there's no rhyme (as is to be expected in a tanka), the rhythm is great thanks to the repetition of sounds: blossoms bloom, sleep/creek.
Thanks for sharing. x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Heather, for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from aryr
A great tanka, Gypsy. I thought the picture was beautiful, all those cherry blossoms. I loved your words because they blended in the cherry blossoms and the river nicely. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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A great tanka, Gypsy. I thought the picture was beautiful, all those cherry blossoms. I loved your words because they blended in the cherry blossoms and the river nicely. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank very, Aryr. Blessed be, my friend. Hugs.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
Cherry blossoms are that sign of spring's rebirth and they speak to me of time flowing. Your poem uses that symbol in dream to show how that through life and dreams, the seasons keep flowing.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Cherry blossoms are that sign of spring's rebirth and they speak to me of time flowing. Your poem uses that symbol in dream to show how that through life and dreams, the seasons keep flowing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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You understand my poem perfectly.
Thank you very much, Helen. You are the best.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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Comment from royowen
Whatever we're doing, while the rest of us are sleeping, or at work, or working in the garden, creation keeps proliferating, not dependant on us, only on God not turning His back. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Whatever we're doing, while the rest of us are sleeping, or at work, or working in the garden, creation keeps proliferating, not dependant on us, only on God not turning His back. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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Welcome
Comment from karenina
Beautiful! Such a serene dreamlike imagination... You reflect this wonderful, magical passing of time we call life. "To sleep, perchance to dream..." (Said Will!) How I'd love to dream of this transformative cycle of cherry blossoms!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Beautiful! Such a serene dreamlike imagination... You reflect this wonderful, magical passing of time we call life. "To sleep, perchance to dream..." (Said Will!) How I'd love to dream of this transformative cycle of cherry blossoms!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Yes, you get it. (*<>*)
Thank you very much, sweetie pie.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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Always love reading your masterpieces!
