Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Loving Desire, takes the readers on a walk-about which p4oves to be even more exciting than was first expected. Few have seen these sights and only on paper.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022

And glorious sights they are. Thanks for the read and feedback.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

The image could have stood alone and gotten five stars; however your sentiments enflame on paper how she enflamed you physically. One lucky guy but that is no surprise to you.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022

Yeah, I know it. Thanks for the read and feedback.

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Good response to the writing prompt. In many ways, it is beautifully written soft erotica that cherishes and celebrates the body of the beloved. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022

Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.

Comment from LostInSilence

Good

The first line is a little hard to read. I think you mean want only to not wantonly.
This is a lovely poem. I enjoy the imagery of a traveler exploring her being. It is nicely written.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022

No, I meant wantonly. The meaning is in a lustful or sexually unrestrained way. So I disagree with your comment. I believe the word is appropriate for the tone of the poem. However, thanks for the read and feedback.

reply by LostInSilence on 28-Jul-2022

Well I learned a new word today. Thank you for the repsonse.

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022

You are welcome.