Calvin
A quiet mountain man.39 total reviews
Comment from Susan Newell
Willie,
I really enjoyed your poem and I could envision a man who helped to tame the west and was quickly forgotten. But it strikes me as true for so many human beings who live their lives and make only small marks, while they do the work that keeps everything running. Very nicely rhymed.
Sue
  |
Willie,
I really enjoyed your poem and I could envision a man who helped to tame the west and was quickly forgotten. But it strikes me as true for so many human beings who live their lives and make only small marks, while they do the work that keeps everything running. Very nicely rhymed.
Sue
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from pome lover
good poem and neat story.
I'm assuming Calvin was a real person?
Even if he wasn't, I think he was, in your representation, a good example of the mountan men who helped make this country. And I like the cursive in brown "ink" that compliments the picture.
Very nice.
Katharine
|
good poem and neat story.
I'm assuming Calvin was a real person?
Even if he wasn't, I think he was, in your representation, a good example of the mountan men who helped make this country. And I like the cursive in brown "ink" that compliments the picture.
Very nice.
Katharine
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about this mountain man that enjoyed his life where he was on the mountain with his wife. You used great descriptive words. I like the font you used for this poem. Very good words and imagery. Blessings, Teri
|
This is a very well written poem about this mountain man that enjoyed his life where he was on the mountain with his wife. You used great descriptive words. I like the font you used for this poem. Very good words and imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I doubt these men and women would even recognize society today. That's a shame. Thank you for sharing this well written poem with us. I enjoyed reading. I hope I catch more of your writin.
|
I doubt these men and women would even recognize society today. That's a shame. Thank you for sharing this well written poem with us. I enjoyed reading. I hope I catch more of your writin.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from nomi338
The beautiful thing about life. If you are a good man who trains and leaves children to carry on, whether the world in general ever knows what you may have done. Your children will show them by their displaying the values you instilled in them.
|
The beautiful thing about life. If you are a good man who trains and leaves children to carry on, whether the world in general ever knows what you may have done. Your children will show them by their displaying the values you instilled in them.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a creatively written story in a poem, that would have made a great contest entry. It tells the story of a man like many unknown people, who live quietly and live right, and are never known to the world. Thank you for reposting so more people could enjoy your work.
|
This is a creatively written story in a poem, that would have made a great contest entry. It tells the story of a man like many unknown people, who live quietly and live right, and are never known to the world. Thank you for reposting so more people could enjoy your work.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
What a man. And he never got recognition. He sort of reminds me of Daniel Boone. I enjoyed watching Daniel Boone. And this story is just as good and important. Thank you for sharing.
|
What a man. And he never got recognition. He sort of reminds me of Daniel Boone. I enjoyed watching Daniel Boone. And this story is just as good and important. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Maybe it's better to not submit a work every day. I see this was written in July. I have a folder of things likewise waiting for a matching contest, but then think I have many friends who are entertained by my releases, so I write everyday. In any regards, I miss reading you poems.
|
Maybe it's better to not submit a work every day. I see this was written in July. I have a folder of things likewise waiting for a matching contest, but then think I have many friends who are entertained by my releases, so I write everyday. In any regards, I miss reading you poems.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Wille,
This is a well told poetic story about the many men show helped build the Wild West but never got credit. They gave it live for posterity and died humbly.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
|
Wille,
This is a well told poetic story about the many men show helped build the Wild West but never got credit. They gave it live for posterity and died humbly.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
Comment from Wendy G
That's the case for many: quiet hard-working men and women who quietly contributed to their region or community or their country, received no praise or credit, but were integral to the development of their country.
Well written, in a style that suits the theme.
Wendy
|
That's the case for many: quiet hard-working men and women who quietly contributed to their region or community or their country, received no praise or credit, but were integral to the development of their country.
Well written, in a style that suits the theme.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
