My Sister
She truly loves me.5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the My Loved One. You used very good heartfelt and very descriptive words about your sister. That is a very nice picture of you two. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the My Loved One. You used very good heartfelt and very descriptive words about your sister. That is a very nice picture of you two. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, I gave you your first vote!
It s obvious that there is a strong bond between the two of you.
You praise your sister too as a great mother, a true friend , as a lovely human being.
I have s step brother ( same father).
He doesn't live in Italy but he has come to visit seldom first alone then with his wife and family.
Pa was happy to see him and took him and family to see , explore our beauty cities, lands.
For pa s sake got along but now that our father has passed we have nothing to say to each other not even Merry Christmas.
He hates me and I am indifferent towards him.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Ciao poet, I gave you your first vote!
It s obvious that there is a strong bond between the two of you.
You praise your sister too as a great mother, a true friend , as a lovely human being.
I have s step brother ( same father).
He doesn't live in Italy but he has come to visit seldom first alone then with his wife and family.
Pa was happy to see him and took him and family to see , explore our beauty cities, lands.
For pa s sake got along but now that our father has passed we have nothing to say to each other not even Merry Christmas.
He hates me and I am indifferent towards him.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Aw, this is such a sweet tribute to your sister, and the photograph is adorable. :)
I'm not sure what happened to the text, but in lines 1-3 in each stanza, the bottom of the letters look cut off wherever there is a g or a p, etc. I don't know what would cause that... It's still readable, but I thought I'd mention it. Very strange.
Take care,
Erika
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Aw, this is such a sweet tribute to your sister, and the photograph is adorable. :)
I'm not sure what happened to the text, but in lines 1-3 in each stanza, the bottom of the letters look cut off wherever there is a g or a p, etc. I don't know what would cause that... It's still readable, but I thought I'd mention it. Very strange.
Take care,
Erika
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Sister, is a terrific sendup for your sibling. She seems to present herself with Christ-like characteristics which mak3 her a force for good and a nice person to know.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This poem, My Sister, is a terrific sendup for your sibling. She seems to present herself with Christ-like characteristics which mak3 her a force for good and a nice person to know.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thanks! She is wonderful!
Comment from Paul McFarland
A nice tribute to your sister. It sound like she lives close by. I hope so. I don't see my brothers very often. There is a bond, but not a really close one.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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A nice tribute to your sister. It sound like she lives close by. I hope so. I don't see my brothers very often. There is a bond, but not a really close one.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thanks!
