Driveway Parking
It works for me!7 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I love it. You have just thoroughly described a situation that drives me crazy. I see my neighbor's car out in the driveway all the time. When his garage door is opened, I can see why. If you have a garage, why not just use it for what it is intended, park the car in it already.
Fun poem, thanks for a morning giggle.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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I love it. You have just thoroughly described a situation that drives me crazy. I see my neighbor's car out in the driveway all the time. When his garage door is opened, I can see why. If you have a garage, why not just use it for what it is intended, park the car in it already.
Fun poem, thanks for a morning giggle.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked my poem. It's always nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
You are not alone. A great many people if they are honest use their garages for storage areas. This poem has a clear message that is relatable. The font size is easy to read. The rhyme scheme is 2nd and 4th lines in every verse, and it is done consistently. There is also a tad of humor in your poem. The visual is funny and fit perfectly. You have a great entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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You are not alone. A great many people if they are honest use their garages for storage areas. This poem has a clear message that is relatable. The font size is easy to read. The rhyme scheme is 2nd and 4th lines in every verse, and it is done consistently. There is also a tad of humor in your poem. The visual is funny and fit perfectly. You have a great entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thanks, I'm so glad you liked my poem. Have a wonderful evening. :)
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You are welcome. Have a good evening too because I voted for you. You are doing well in the contest. LOL
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Congress should investigate how many homes in the U.S. of A. are misnamed as a place to park a car for I am willing to bet many more are used as storage bins.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Congress should investigate how many homes in the U.S. of A. are misnamed as a place to park a car for I am willing to bet many more are used as storage bins.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I believe you are correct. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. You did a good job with this. Your chosen mess is one that many people can relate too. And it's the reason many people park on the street, even in winter. Your rhyme is strong and well crafted.
This will likely win.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Very nice. You did a good job with this. Your chosen mess is one that many people can relate too. And it's the reason many people park on the street, even in winter. Your rhyme is strong and well crafted.
This will likely win.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this encouraging review...it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from jessizero
I loved your poem about the mess in your garage. I can absolutely relate. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I loved your poem about the mess in your garage. I can absolutely relate. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked my poem. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi! Good luck for the contest
with this beauty of a poem
about the messes we make.
Our garage is the same way.
We had to sell a barely used
treadmill we bought for
$700, for only $60. We just
didn't get anyone who was
willing to pay the $200 we
wanted for it, lol! Your poem
is charming and witty. Have
a creative weekend. Blessings
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Hi! Good luck for the contest
with this beauty of a poem
about the messes we make.
Our garage is the same way.
We had to sell a barely used
treadmill we bought for
$700, for only $60. We just
didn't get anyone who was
willing to pay the $200 we
wanted for it, lol! Your poem
is charming and witty. Have
a creative weekend. Blessings
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review and your insightful comments. Have a nice evening. :)
Comment from RodG
I think if my wife would leave the garage to me, it would be a mess like this Speaker's. Our car, too, sits outside on the driveway in all seasons. Stanza 5 could almost stand alone.
Rod
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I think if my wife would leave the garage to me, it would be a mess like this Speaker's. Our car, too, sits outside on the driveway in all seasons. Stanza 5 could almost stand alone.
Rod
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Hahahaha...a kindred spirit! Thank you for this great review. :)
