7-year-old Me
Looking a long way back28 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a little cutie you were. I think you're right, the colour does look good with the photo.
The words in your poem are what life is all about, there are ugly times in life, but with God beside us, we can always get through. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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What a little cutie you were. I think you're right, the colour does look good with the photo.
The words in your poem are what life is all about, there are ugly times in life, but with God beside us, we can always get through. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Sandra. Your words are encouraging.
Take care
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
In my new house, my bedroom walls are the same color. At first, I did not care for the color of green, but since I decorated my room, I love them now. I went through much as a seven-year-old child. My grandmother died on her birthday, August 6, 1960, which was sixty-two years ago yesterday. My infant sister, four months old, died in the bed with me. I like your picture. You girls are so cute. We have to follow the Lord.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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In my new house, my bedroom walls are the same color. At first, I did not care for the color of green, but since I decorated my room, I love them now. I went through much as a seven-year-old child. My grandmother died on her birthday, August 6, 1960, which was sixty-two years ago yesterday. My infant sister, four months old, died in the bed with me. I like your picture. You girls are so cute. We have to follow the Lord.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing , Carolyn. I?m sorry you had such sadness so early in life. We had a small family, just two girls and my parents. I was such an innocent child, but rough times were ahead. Without God, I don?t know where I would be now.
Take care
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet colourful picture and a memory captured in a photograph of you when you were seven. Life has twists and turns along the way but we try and survive and make the best of life, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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A sweet colourful picture and a memory captured in a photograph of you when you were seven. Life has twists and turns along the way but we try and survive and make the best of life, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Dolly! I appreciate you stopping by to give your thoughts.
Take care
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 verse about coping with adversity.
This is a creative entry for the contest.
The photo adds authenticity and connects the reader to your carefully chosen words.
The overall presentation and color story compliment the sentiment left.
I appreciate the author notes, as I enjoy knowing the thought process behind what the
poet/ poetess has penned.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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I enjoyed this 5-7-5 verse about coping with adversity.
This is a creative entry for the contest.
The photo adds authenticity and connects the reader to your carefully chosen words.
The overall presentation and color story compliment the sentiment left.
I appreciate the author notes, as I enjoy knowing the thought process behind what the
poet/ poetess has penned.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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KL, I appreciate your thoughts and words of encouragement. I tend to write long pieces, but thought less was more in this case.
Take care
Comment from MissMerri
Oh, such a cute little girl! I liked the poem very much because it was concise, yet meaningful, offering some excellent advice. The only thing I did not like was that it was too short. I want to know much more about that little girl. But maybe you could write another biographical poem soon, with more details. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Oh, such a cute little girl! I liked the poem very much because it was concise, yet meaningful, offering some excellent advice. The only thing I did not like was that it was too short. I want to know much more about that little girl. But maybe you could write another biographical poem soon, with more details. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. MM
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you, MissMerri! I usually write long everything, hehe, but when starting this poem, I was overwhelmed with information. I decided to try something new and just pack up all the thoughts into a few words that could speak for it all.
Again, much thanks!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Everything about this entry is sweet. The message which is about human feelings is a Senryu. It is a clear and well-stated message. The font size is easily readable. The photo fits perfectly. You have a good entry for this contest. Well-done.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Everything about this entry is sweet. The message which is about human feelings is a Senryu. It is a clear and well-stated message. The font size is easily readable. The photo fits perfectly. You have a good entry for this contest. Well-done.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Sandra, for your thoughts on the short poem, and for confirming that it is a Senryu. I?m trying to expand and explore poetic types, and hope to pull them off amongst those of you more seasoned. My usual genre is prose, but some thoughts are best presented in poetry.
Again, much thanks
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You are welcome. It was a good entry.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The picture is awesome. The color scheme works well.
You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your contest
entry. Your words are well thought out, the syllable count
a correct per line, and your give readers much to think about
in a good way. I like the use of the words dance/step and esp
what you paired with step. Yes, God watches those who believe.
Thanks for sharing ad best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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The picture is awesome. The color scheme works well.
You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your contest
entry. Your words are well thought out, the syllable count
a correct per line, and your give readers much to think about
in a good way. I like the use of the words dance/step and esp
what you paired with step. Yes, God watches those who believe.
Thanks for sharing ad best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reviewing, Jan, and for reviewing with your usual attention to detail. Especially for developing poets, such things are priceless. I?m glad you noticed the dance/step element. It was intentional. As I experiment with poetic forms, I am forced to face giving meaning in new ways. Few words mean to load them with meaning.
Take care
Comment from Jay Squires
such a happy senryu! The second line kind of surprised me with it's hint of a darker presence in the "ugly dance" that life can be. I hope that, as a 7-year-old life was not already ugly. But with an older sister and the happiness of bicycle riding, and keeping step with God, you can conquer the world! Good luck with the contest.
Jay
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such a happy senryu! The second line kind of surprised me with it's hint of a darker presence in the "ugly dance" that life can be. I hope that, as a 7-year-old life was not already ugly. But with an older sister and the happiness of bicycle riding, and keeping step with God, you can conquer the world! Good luck with the contest.
Jay
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Jay, thank you for reading and reviewing. Life was not ugly back then, for sure, but, like most lives, it had its twists and turns. My sister is still my best friend, though the parents, and bicycle are now gone.
Take care.
