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Gert's farewell

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A long time fanstory member just passed away

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Comment from harmony13
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Such a beautiful dedication to Gert and her family. The author's words
are uplifting, clear, calming, trusting, filled with memories and are descriptive and creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they are
lovely. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is peaceful!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
    Thank you Maria, for these great comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cindylou1
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This is beautifully written to honor your friend. I hope it brings comfort to her loved ones. Roy, you have a depth to your poems that I can only hope, that some day I can aspire to. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Cindy

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
    Thanks Cindy, for these marvellous comments and review, blessings Roy
reply by Cindylou1 on 10-Aug-2022
    Welcome.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Roy, this is just beautiful my sweet friend...
I am in tears...

my heart goes out to her family...and friends...
and to her beloved husband...she admired and loved
dearly...may God ease their pain...

she was such a talented writer...and a wonderful friend
to so many...and will be so very missed...I hate when we
lose a member of our FanStory family...through our writings
we get to know and love each other dearly...

I am heartbroken...I know she now is Resting In Peace...
and is now with God...it doesn't get better than that Roy...
and in God's time her and Stan will reunite...until then
God will watch over him...and her family and friends...

Thank you for this beautiful poem you dedicated to Gert...
I love your poem...and love the picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
    Thanks Linda for your compassionate comments and empathetic review.blessings Roy
reply by l.raven on 10-Aug-2022
    your so welcome Roy...always my sweet friend...love xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
    Bless you
reply by l.raven on 10-Aug-2022
    Bless You as well my sweet friend...
    love xxoo
Comment from nomi338
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Death and time together and separately, threaten to claim us all. We can leave here with few if any taking any note of our passing. We can leave here and as we go, leave a multitude of mourners, weeping and beating their chests in sorrow. Dear Gert will be missed in such a manner. I will miss her wonderful output going forward until it is my own time to depart this life.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
    Thanks bro for your lovely comments and review.blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem for Gert and now, more particularly for Stan. Their love story was quite an amazing one. Gert was much loved here, and she will be greatly missed. Stan will find comfort in such words of tribute.
Wendy

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
    Thanks Wendy, for your compassionate comments and empathetic review.blessings Roy
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Death is the unpleasant part of God's gift, Life. But if one is right with the Lord, it can be the highlight of our life. It sounds like Gert is in that group.

Stanza 1, 4th line Is this right? (where we glorys...)

Very nice tribute.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022
    Thanks Gary for your super comments and excellent review.blessings Roy
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I love that this is about the fading to peace of the flame, but that the flame is no longer required, and what's faced is a gentle and fulfilling sensation of completion. This was a very fitting piece, Roy.

Mike

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
    Thanks Mike, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A lovely poem about the twilight of our days and a lovely poem to ahare in Gert Sherwood's memory. Thanks for sharing this poem and the news Roy.

Valda

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
    Thanks Valda, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gloria ....
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Very nicely written, Roy. An exquisite tribute to Gert who contributed so much to FanStory over the years.

She will be sorely missed by everyone.

Many thanks for sharing and starting a book of remembrance.

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
    Thanks Gloria, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is a befitting verse in remembrance of your dear friend.
The carefully selected words and phrasing will give comfort to those grieving. They may also feel uplifted by them as well. I did not know her, but judging by the posts I have read this evening, she was admired and loved.
This is truely more than a site to share your poetry or prose. FS is a community of people with common interests and goals that honestly care for one another.
How refreshing!!
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
    Thank you yes, Gert was a lady in every sense of the word and a great loss to fanstory, thank you for your empathetic and most wonderful stars, and compassion, blessings Roy