Dazed and Confused
Just a little political humor26 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Poor guy. He has been diagnosed with cancer. And he might have dementia. He is up there in age. If he is getting holidays confused, he does not need to be the President. God help us all. We all need some humour. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Poor guy. He has been diagnosed with cancer. And he might have dementia. He is up there in age. If he is getting holidays confused, he does not need to be the President. God help us all. We all need some humour. Have a great day.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thanks Carolyn, I do have compassion for anyone w cancer, but it doesn't erase the mess he is making of our country. I truly appreciate your very kid review and comments. Thanks again my friend!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Quite clever and subtle political humour. As a non-American I can make no comment on the accuracy, but I thought it was very witty. Well presented. Bets wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Quite clever and subtle political humour. As a non-American I can make no comment on the accuracy, but I thought it was very witty. Well presented. Bets wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Wendy, I thank you for your kind review, even tho you maybe didn't approve. You are always so gracious and is what I love most about you. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from LovnPeace
LOL. Too true and funny. It said today he was unaware, the FBI would raid
President Trump's home. He isn't aware of anything. Good entry. Good luck. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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LOL. Too true and funny. It said today he was unaware, the FBI would raid
President Trump's home. He isn't aware of anything. Good entry. Good luck. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Barbara you are so very kind! Thank you for the lovely review and comments! I so appreciate your gracious gift of six stars! And is always fun to chat with a friend who agrees that this guy is dazed and confused!
Thank you so much my friend!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, your poem made me laugh. Great photo choice.
I especially liked:
daze
on the day that we give thanks
A fun poem.
Food for thought:
dazed and hazed
vs..
daze and haze
Either way, it's a great poem, and it stands on its own merit. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Hello author, your poem made me laugh. Great photo choice.
I especially liked:
daze
on the day that we give thanks
A fun poem.
Food for thought:
dazed and hazed
vs..
daze and haze
Either way, it's a great poem, and it stands on its own merit. LateBloomer
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thanks Margaret! I appreciate so much your kind review and comments.
I thought about using the words dazed and hazed but they don't rhyme with praise. And I was trying more to show that his head is in a daze and a haze, which people would understand haze meaning not clear or foggy. But hazed is associated more w what they do to college freshman's. Y'know?
Thanks again my friend.
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However thank you for thrygreat suggestions!
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Sorry. I thought only the first and last line had to rhyme. Margaret
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That's ok, I do appreciate your suggestions.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Great 1-6-1 poem. love it. I like the rhyming and image of a hot turkey dinner on a hot summer day. I like the word choices here. Works great it seems.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Great 1-6-1 poem. love it. I like the rhyming and image of a hot turkey dinner on a hot summer day. I like the word choices here. Works great it seems.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Awe Jake, thanks so much. I guess we can't walk around moping about the conditions of our country all the time, so we might as well have a little humor in our life. Thanks for the great review and comments my friend!
Comment from royowen
I've read about the slightly demeaning reputation of the latest president, although I think he's OK, I'm not exactly, some of our politicians have been caught napping, but then some are up late. Beautifully written 1/6/1, great rhyming, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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I've read about the slightly demeaning reputation of the latest president, although I think he's OK, I'm not exactly, some of our politicians have been caught napping, but then some are up late. Beautifully written 1/6/1, great rhyming, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thanks Roy, obviously I have some strong views, as I worry about the future of our nation for our grandkids. However this post was just meant for fun! Sometimes we just need a good laugh. Thanks as always for the kind review my friend!
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Of course
Comment from karenina
This poor man can't catch a break. I'd hate to be so "hazed" at his age.
The darn calendar on the wall over his left shoulder says November...
Sometimes I wonder if he wakes up and questions: "Tell me again why I wanted to be President?"
He does seem to be walking in a fog even on the clearest of days...
I think he can handle the political jokes.
He gets skewered enough!
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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This poor man can't catch a break. I'd hate to be so "hazed" at his age.
The darn calendar on the wall over his left shoulder says November...
Sometimes I wonder if he wakes up and questions: "Tell me again why I wanted to be President?"
He does seem to be walking in a fog even on the clearest of days...
I think he can handle the political jokes.
He gets skewered enough!
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Karenina my friend, I don't think he knows the difference and if he does, he's pulling a bigger swindle on America than what we even realize.
Sorry Hon, my faith just can't handle the democrats views. But I am trying to just use humor and have a little fun with it. Thanks for the great review my friend!
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I'm good with fun!
We need SOMETHING to laugh at these days!
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.I agree dear friend!
Comment from harmony13
The author' words are clear, interesting, descriptive and creative. The
author's poem made me smile and made sense to me! I really like the
author's ways of using kind words for political humor! The artwork is
awesome and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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The author' words are clear, interesting, descriptive and creative. The
author's poem made me smile and made sense to me! I really like the
author's ways of using kind words for political humor! The artwork is
awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thanks Maria! You are so sweet! Lol, my words were just a little more to do with him being confused so much, but it was just political humor.
I thank you my very dear friend such a kind review review of my silly poem.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. It's funny but unfortunately very true. This is very well written, and I enjoyed reading. It's a sad state of our government with something like this has truth to it.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. It's funny but unfortunately very true. This is very well written, and I enjoyed reading. It's a sad state of our government with something like this has truth to it.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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You are absolutely correct about our leader. And since there's not much we can do about it at this time, might as well use a little humor to get through it. Thanks Barb for the awesome review and comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, there's more than 1 turkey in the picture.
You did a great job with a few syllables to convey
this sad message. Your syllable count is correct
per line as are the rhymes. Yes, voters were in a
haze that sad day when they heaped praise on this
one.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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Well, there's more than 1 turkey in the picture.
You did a great job with a few syllables to convey
this sad message. Your syllable count is correct
per line as are the rhymes. Yes, voters were in a
haze that sad day when they heaped praise on this
one.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 09-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022
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You are absolutely correct about our leader. And since there's not much we can do about it at this time, might as well use a little humor to get through it. Thanks Jan for the awesome review and comments.
