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Comment from lancellot
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This is both sad and loving at the same time. It brings up the questions: Do you really have to let go? or Does the love we share last beyond what we can see, hear and touch? Does it ever leave? I hope it is everlasting.


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    HI, Lance.... I miss your stories and home life is going well for you.

    My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Ahh, I'm so happy you are back. I miss your enchanting pieces and kind demeanor--what an excellent entry. I wish you the best with the contest and can't wait to see more. Best, JohnC.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much, John!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am so glad you're back. You have really been on my heart these last few days. I've been praying constantly for you and your family.

Thank you for sharing this special moment contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    HI, Barbara! Looks like life still has the upper hand in my case and writing is on the back burner once again. Fighting to get the girls back (it's an ugly mess) and then the black clouds smothered me again. Thanks for the prayers and thoughts.

reply by barbara.wilkey on 23-Aug-2022
    Will continue to send love and prayers.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    Thank you my dear friend.
Comment from karenina
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Hello, dear one. If anything would motivate you to jump into a contest and write, it would be this ~ a sweet moment or remembrance for your dear husband. I'm sure you miss him more with each passing day, as your family seems to be in turmoil! I can almost hear him telling you to take care of YOU! Please listen... You know he'd want that more than all!

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Sally Law
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Good to see you back, dear Carol. A sad but well-penned post of your loss. My condolences across the miles.

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
reply by Sally Law on 23-Aug-2022
    You are so welcome. My life is nuts but I'm writing anyway. You're in my thoughts and prayers, dear. Sal XOs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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You are such a beautiful and descriptive writer and I could feel your words in my heart as though you were talking to me. The surprise in the end crashed the happy moment but it's what supposed to be.

Excellent and good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much for caring about what my heart puts to paper. I appreciate it very very much.

    My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from jessizero
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This was so lovely and sad. I know today must be a hard day for you. I am so sorry. I like that, until interrupted, you could sense his presence. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is beautiful, Carol. It's wonderful that you can still hold onto that deep love you and your husband had, and the memories provide place to go when times are tough. Hugs.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
    My apologies for the long delay in responding to your kind review. Unfortunately, our family lost two more members this month, which has consumed me emotionally and time-wise. I appreciate everyone's thoughts and words concerning my writing and my health. The cyclone of life is not a good place at the moment. Though writing is my love and my escape, reality has a strong hold on me currently and my thoughts aren't for paper. Take care and thank you so much for caring. Hugs to all - Carol
reply by Judy Lawless on 23-Aug-2022
    I?m so sorry to hear you?ve had more pain and sadness in your family, Carol. Hugs.