Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
that many may relate to. Some find their dreams quite enjoyable,
other see nightmares.
An absurd life may be just the thing.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022

thanks a lot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author.
Great job with the description of you in 17
syllables. Your words flowed smoothly with
great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

thanks i corrected it