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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "In a World of Chaos"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, a timely poem. Sadly, the World being in chaos is something that I frequently talk about. I especially liked:
splendid sunrises and sunsets
come and go
(Gypsy, splendid sunrises and sunsets may the One of the only things that unites the world during the unrestful time.)
Beautiful presentation and artwork choice. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy, a timely poem. Sadly, the World being in chaos is something that I frequently talk about. I especially liked:
splendid sunrises and sunsets
come and go
(Gypsy, splendid sunrises and sunsets may the One of the only things that unites the world during the unrestful time.)
Beautiful presentation and artwork choice. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Margaret, Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review. I appreciate your kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautiful poem Gypsy...As we find living in a world of chaos and upsetting headlines, there still is beauty to find in the sunrises and sunsets of the day.
Wonderful presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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A beautiful poem Gypsy...As we find living in a world of chaos and upsetting headlines, there still is beauty to find in the sunrises and sunsets of the day.
Wonderful presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and beauty is hard to come by in this ever more ugly world we find ourselves Trumpisised in, it's getting to be a rare thing indeed
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and beauty is hard to come by in this ever more ugly world we find ourselves Trumpisised in, it's getting to be a rare thing indeed
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Mike. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from aryr
That was a delightful thought you had for the tanka, Gypsy. It is so true that regardless the sun rises each day and sets each night, even when it is overcast. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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That was a delightful thought you had for the tanka, Gypsy. It is so true that regardless the sun rises each day and sets each night, even when it is overcast. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. Aryr, you are always so kind and truthful, I really appreciate it. Your feedback is welcomed. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
ebbs and flow. But change is always on the horizon of perspective and attitude to any given situation.
I guess, life marches forward in deliberate measured strides, no matter what's going on around us. We are the ones who seem to stall and baulk, even though the very same beauty surrounds us at all times.
He who remains calm while others around him are in chaos, will always see a more brighter-vibrant existence... no matter.
I love this presentation. The image chosen is stunning... I can see you by the water, walking-contemplating, breathing in the beauty... appreciating the 'consistently without fail'.
Yes Gypsy Queen, your beauty is both seen, and unseen.
"The poet paints the breath of life and awaits its birth."--Jumbo.
With our thoughts we create...
serenity of the soul.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
ebbs and flow. But change is always on the horizon of perspective and attitude to any given situation.
I guess, life marches forward in deliberate measured strides, no matter what's going on around us. We are the ones who seem to stall and baulk, even though the very same beauty surrounds us at all times.
He who remains calm while others around him are in chaos, will always see a more brighter-vibrant existence... no matter.
I love this presentation. The image chosen is stunning... I can see you by the water, walking-contemplating, breathing in the beauty... appreciating the 'consistently without fail'.
Yes Gypsy Queen, your beauty is both seen, and unseen.
"The poet paints the breath of life and awaits its birth."--Jumbo.
With our thoughts we create...
serenity of the soul.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Hello, James,
I love that you call me, "Gypsy Queen" it has a good sound and feeling. I had another friend, that past away, he also called me "gypsy queen" and 50 more ... hahaha ... he was really funny and always made me laugh. I've been called "Sensei", that means "teacher" in Japanese, That is when I was teaching Haiku. Anyway... I am sorry ... I regress.... lets get back. Your beautiful reviews always lift my spirit. You are very kind to me. I always appreciate that you take the time to give me a detailed and kind review. The six stars are icing on the cake...so sweet. I had fun with this one. I was happy when I found the picture, that came second, it seemed to fit in well.
Have a wonderful weekend with your loved ones.
Gypsy Queen
"I am an artist, my hair is rarely tamed & sometimes I sleep till noon. My house is messy and I speak to the moon. I care less about the materials that I share with my world and more about the passion inside myself. I'm an artist, what more can you expect? i am full of soul, love and all the rest." ?― Nikki Rowe, about gypsy queens
Comment from Ricky1024
"A World of Chaos"
A 5/8/3 Modern Tanka.
This was well written rich in theme and imagery.
Note: I would suggest a change in the beginning paragraph from the color of purple to a lighter possible pale green?
Yes, so it can be read easier.
Otherwise this was beautifully scripted and good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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"A World of Chaos"
A 5/8/3 Modern Tanka.
This was well written rich in theme and imagery.
Note: I would suggest a change in the beginning paragraph from the color of purple to a lighter possible pale green?
Yes, so it can be read easier.
Otherwise this was beautifully scripted and good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. You are always so kind and honest, I really appreciate it. Your feedback is welcomed.
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- good presentation picture- good visual for the reader - out of a chaotic universe world manages to consistently produce the order of consistent sunsets and sun rises every day! Good job
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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I like your tanka poem- good presentation picture- good visual for the reader - out of a chaotic universe world manages to consistently produce the order of consistent sunsets and sun rises every day! Good job
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
Thank you very much, AP.
Gypsy
"Poetry hewials the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have written a beautiful Modern Tanka, relating that nature will continue unabated, regardless of human muddle and attempts at destruction. I'm sure that this isn't strictly true, I think we're capable of messing up even Mother Nature, but I admire your optimism. Kate xx
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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You have written a beautiful Modern Tanka, relating that nature will continue unabated, regardless of human muddle and attempts at destruction. I'm sure that this isn't strictly true, I think we're capable of messing up even Mother Nature, but I admire your optimism. Kate xx
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Kate. (*<>*) hugs!
Gypsy
"Poetry hewials the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
So true. Nature remains faithfully following the rhythm that God created despite all the chaos that mankind creates on the planet. Another beautiful presentation!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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So true. Nature remains faithfully following the rhythm that God created despite all the chaos that mankind creates on the planet. Another beautiful presentation!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Helen. It's good to hear from you. I hope all is well.
Hugs!
Marival ❤️
Comment from Raul1
It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Nice work!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Nice work!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from you.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."- Atticus
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You're welcome! Thanks!
