Attuned to the Breeze
Wind chime music13 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem . Congrats on your 1stplace winning entry. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Nice overall presentation. We'll done.
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This is a beautifully written poem . Congrats on your 1stplace winning entry. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Nice overall presentation. We'll done.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a lovely stated 3-5-3 entry. The text is clear and large. The syllable count seems to be on point. The message is stated well. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a lovely stated 3-5-3 entry. The text is clear and large. The syllable count seems to be on point. The message is stated well. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love your poem about chime music best you get my vote.
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. You grasped the 3/5/3 form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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I love your poem about chime music best you get my vote.
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. You grasped the 3/5/3 form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I love wind chimes. My wife has them both on the front porch and on the back. Even in the windiest of weather, I enjoy hearing them. But, as your verse suggests, it takes only a "breath" of a breeze to get them singing to us. Very nice.
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I love wind chimes. My wife has them both on the front porch and on the back. Even in the windiest of weather, I enjoy hearing them. But, as your verse suggests, it takes only a "breath" of a breeze to get them singing to us. Very nice.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from jaded831
You added sound to your poem, which makes it unique. Most poems concentrate on feel for this contest. My sister gave me wind chimes and whenever they sound, I think of her. Good luck in the contest.
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You added sound to your poem, which makes it unique. Most poems concentrate on feel for this contest. My sister gave me wind chimes and whenever they sound, I think of her. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from Wendy G
I like the image you chose to accompany your words - a fine presentation. The alliteration in the first line is pleasing too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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I like the image you chose to accompany your words - a fine presentation. The alliteration in the first line is pleasing too. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Great alliterative opening - "Breath of breeze" and that breath causes music just like the breath of humans causes the voice to sing "dulcet notes." Best wishes in the contest!
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Great alliterative opening - "Breath of breeze" and that breath causes music just like the breath of humans causes the voice to sing "dulcet notes." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
There are so many varieties of wind chimes. They do play some great tunes when the wind blows. They are great decorations around the outside of your house. Thank you for sharing your great poem and picture.
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There are so many varieties of wind chimes. They do play some great tunes when the wind blows. They are great decorations around the outside of your house. Thank you for sharing your great poem and picture.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Wonderful air poem for this prompt, mystery poet. A lovely chime to crown your fine entry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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Wonderful air poem for this prompt, mystery poet. A lovely chime to crown your fine entry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
Comment from jessizero
I appreciated the way you described wind as "breath of breeze." Your word choices made the poem shine. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I appreciated the way you described wind as "breath of breeze." Your word choices made the poem shine. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
