Swirling
20 syllable poem32 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
As an always-lover of fall--mid-fall when the leaves are changing to those magnificent colors--I appreciate the expressive use you have made of your twenty syllables.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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As an always-lover of fall--mid-fall when the leaves are changing to those magnificent colors--I appreciate the expressive use you have made of your twenty syllables.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Great review zanya
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the poem and the picture. The pictures shows falling leaves according to the poem.
The poem describes very vividly how trees behave by falling their leaves in Autumn.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I like the poem and the picture. The pictures shows falling leaves according to the poem.
The poem describes very vividly how trees behave by falling their leaves in Autumn.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Zanya,
I love the fall and your poem epitomizes the visual beauty and strong scents of Autumn, using just a few words.
This is an excellent 20 syllable poem.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Zanya,
I love the fall and your poem epitomizes the visual beauty and strong scents of Autumn, using just a few words.
This is an excellent 20 syllable poem.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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You?re welcome.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment from royowen
The seasons are so significant my friend, they all bring and sing a different message. I think that the more moderate weather brings a calm in autumn, a special time of the year, well done Zanya, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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The seasons are so significant my friend, they all bring and sing a different message. I think that the more moderate weather brings a calm in autumn, a special time of the year, well done Zanya, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Great review zanya
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Most welcome Zanya
Comment from estory
Liked the alliteration of all the 'a' sounds, the format winding in on itself in tighter and tighter rhythmic spirals. A nice, simple, clean celebration of the fall with colorful imagery to brighten it up estory
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Liked the alliteration of all the 'a' sounds, the format winding in on itself in tighter and tighter rhythmic spirals. A nice, simple, clean celebration of the fall with colorful imagery to brighten it up estory
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A beautifully stated poem. The font size is large and easily read. The text may be better centered on the large visual. The message is clear. Autumn doesn't need to be capitalized but it's okay if that's what you want as the poet. The visual fits perfectly. This is a good 20 syllable contest entry.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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A beautifully stated poem. The font size is large and easily read. The text may be better centered on the large visual. The message is clear. Autumn doesn't need to be capitalized but it's okay if that's what you want as the poet. The visual fits perfectly. This is a good 20 syllable contest entry.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
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Zanya, you are welcome. Love your name.
Comment from RodG
Another month and it's apple picking time. I can almost smell them. Your short poem sets the scene very well, focusing on the sense of smell as well as the sight of falling leaves. Nice use of alliteration, too.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Another month and it's apple picking time. I can almost smell them. Your short poem sets the scene very well, focusing on the sense of smell as well as the sight of falling leaves. Nice use of alliteration, too.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Great review zanya
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The apples of red, yellow or green are inviting. As a child, I would wander through the woods of nearby neighbors and pick apples and feed the horses. Some of them had worms in them. That grossed me out. I like the poem and the picture. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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The apples of red, yellow or green are inviting. As a child, I would wander through the woods of nearby neighbors and pick apples and feed the horses. Some of them had worms in them. That grossed me out. I like the poem and the picture. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi! I really love enjoying
autumnal poetry and sensing
the first signs of autumn. In
our yard one of the first signs
is the leaves begin to kind of
lose their vibrant green lustre.
Your poem is very well penned and I love the alliteration too. My very best
wishes for the contest.
Blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Hi! I really love enjoying
autumnal poetry and sensing
the first signs of autumn. In
our yard one of the first signs
is the leaves begin to kind of
lose their vibrant green lustre.
Your poem is very well penned and I love the alliteration too. My very best
wishes for the contest.
Blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Great -thanks for sharing zanya
