Swirling
20 syllable poem32 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
We are still in the heat of summer, but as autumn approaches I always dread to see the leaves fall because I have so many trees and it hate to see them bare. This years I'll try to remember to inhale those alluring autumn aromas instead of fretting over falling leaves. I love the way you put it.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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We are still in the heat of summer, but as autumn approaches I always dread to see the leaves fall because I have so many trees and it hate to see them bare. This years I'll try to remember to inhale those alluring autumn aromas instead of fretting over falling leaves. I love the way you put it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Great review zanya
Comment from BermyBye50
Zanya,
A wonderful 20 syllable poem beautifully written. It perfectly pictures the approach of Fall's imminent arrival. All the best in the contest.
Cheers,
Eugene
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Zanya,
A wonderful 20 syllable poem beautifully written. It perfectly pictures the approach of Fall's imminent arrival. All the best in the contest.
Cheers,
Eugene
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Great review zanya
