The Nights My Lights Went Out
A Conversation with Myself17 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, you got all your points across and kept it G rated too. A remarkable feat in itself. But it's your imagination that impresses me to the mark of awe. It's unpredictable, yet more rational than could ever be expected. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Well, you got all your points across and kept it G rated too. A remarkable feat in itself. But it's your imagination that impresses me to the mark of awe. It's unpredictable, yet more rational than could ever be expected. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Rational. There are folks close to me that see that prospect coming to light in 2023 when I turn 75. 😜🙈
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Rational. There are folks close to me that see that prospect coming to light in 2023 when I turn 75. 😜🙈
Comment from strandregs
Yes Tom
It couldn't be more bizzar.
You get champion of the weird decommoration.
So accurately prescribed.
A nun would unrobe and go in search of a rubber.
Yes very explicitly fantastically satisfying
For the weird inclined.
Who could compete with that?
Shakespeare? :-))Z.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Yes Tom
It couldn't be more bizzar.
You get champion of the weird decommoration.
So accurately prescribed.
A nun would unrobe and go in search of a rubber.
Yes very explicitly fantastically satisfying
For the weird inclined.
Who could compete with that?
Shakespeare? :-))Z.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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What?s with your closing meme :-)) zzz? Do I tire you?
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What?s with your closing meme :-)) zzz? Do I tire you?
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Zzzz
Z'me
4 times
Now
If I did this
ZzzzZzzzZzzzZzzz
It would be a sinus.
We don't want you to get
A sinus infection
So, only one
Zzzz
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Oh my, that would be one heck of a situation. had it been reality, you would have been hurting before you stopped breathing. I like the picture, it is very nice. I enjoyed reading your fictitious story. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Oh my, that would be one heck of a situation. had it been reality, you would have been hurting before you stopped breathing. I like the picture, it is very nice. I enjoyed reading your fictitious story. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I try to humorise. 😇😜
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I try to humorise. 😇😜
Comment from jessizero
I couldn't decide if I was amused or horrified. I'll settle for "entertained." :)
This was definitely creative.
Thank you so much for sharing your story here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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I couldn't decide if I was amused or horrified. I'll settle for "entertained." :)
This was definitely creative.
Thank you so much for sharing your story here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Would saying I am appreciative Be appropriate?🙏😘
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LOL. Yes. :)
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Would saying I am appreciative Be appropriate?🙏😘
Comment from Bill Schott
This seems to be one that will win its own contest as it surprisingly fits the requirements so well. being dead seems hilarious in this scenario. We should all try it.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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This seems to be one that will win its own contest as it surprisingly fits the requirements so well. being dead seems hilarious in this scenario. We should all try it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Please. Give it a try. I have a dozen pieces in a folder waiting for a matching contest as for subject matter but it seems the network is filled with haikus, senryus, Diana?s and such where as when I start typing I tend to exceed their requirements. Thanks.
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I first thought you wanted me to give death a try.
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Never. Let?s not race to see who goes first either.
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My wife says we will die together. I am not sure why she is so certain.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You've piqued my interest, with this internal conversation... I'll certainly wander along and look at the contest... but this is a bad week for me. We'll see. Kate xx
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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You've piqued my interest, with this internal conversation... I'll certainly wander along and look at the contest... but this is a bad week for me. We'll see. Kate xx
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Funny? Not overly racy, is it? Hope your week improves and thanks for reading me.
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Very amusing. Not racy at all. Improvement is not on my horizon (read script). Kate xx
Comment from BermyBye50
Tom,
A brilliant write using internal dialogue within yourself to convey this intriguing story. The variety of font sizes enlivens the conversation and allows the reader to join you on this creative fractured fairy tale you've shared.
All the best,
Eugene
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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Tom,
A brilliant write using internal dialogue within yourself to convey this intriguing story. The variety of font sizes enlivens the conversation and allows the reader to join you on this creative fractured fairy tale you've shared.
All the best,
Eugene
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
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How nice. I am glad you enjoyed it. Not too dicey for women, is it? Thanks and best wishes.
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No, not at all. Well done.
Eugene
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How nice. I am glad you enjoyed it. Not too dicey for women, is it? Thanks and best wishes.
